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Mystic Castle

I slip down through sparkling depths,
Gliding silently toward my mystic castle.
I always find peace there within,
Sheltered from the chaos all around me.
Hidden from prying eyes and evil intentions,
And worse, indifference that leaves me no purpose.
They cannot see the tears I weep
Nor care about my solitary existence,
Until someone is reminded 
To feed the goldfish.



For Skat's Pet Contest

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  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:09:00 AM

    Very cool, This is an awesome poem! :)

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 1:47:00 PM

    Wow, never thought about a goldfish that way, Thanks and Congrats on this thoughtful creative write! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:11:00 AM

    congrads on your win Mr.CC.

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:56:00 PM

    very nice poem you penned here friend Craig..congratulations on your win :) hugs,Maria

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:30:00 AM

    wow, Craig, this one was very deep for a pet poem. I would have scored this top rate! Congrats on the winners' list. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:13:00 AM

    Congratulations on your HM Craig xx

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 3:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem - thanks for the nice contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:53:00 PM

    Craig, , CONGRATULATIONS :-) ON YOUR XOOL WINNING pet poem.. always~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:03:00 PM

    thanks 4 the support~LUV~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 5:49:00 PM

    WOW..Craig, you have lots of poems on the new list,,, hope you do not mind me reading them all... hope the goldfish get fed... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:17:00 PM

    What an imaginative poem! I've never read anything from the perspective of a goldfish :) An awesome, creative write! Officially a fave.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:54:00 PM

    Oh boy did you get me LOL..now Craig you can't have pet if you forget to feed it! Thanks for stopping by my blog Light & Love