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Mystic Castle

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Mystic Castle

I slip down through sparkling depths,
Gliding silently toward my mystic castle.
I always find peace there within,
Sheltered from the chaos all around me.
Hidden from prying eyes and evil intentions,
And worse, indifference that leaves me no purpose.
They cannot see the tears I weep
Nor care about my solitary existence,
Until someone is reminded 
To feed the goldfish.



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  1. Date: 1/28/2014 3:48:00 PM

    nice...SKAT

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 12:51:00 AM

    Enjoyed the personification and congrats on your win, Craig

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 10:00:00 AM

    Hey, bud! Congrats on your win in my contest! :)

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 10:59:00 AM

    Congrats on your winning work with this very creative and unique poem..Sara

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:48:00 PM

    poignant poem congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 1:55:00 PM

    Craig, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 11:10:00 AM

    This is the essence of good poetry......a little mystery, filled with metaphor of pain, and hope combined. A place we all have been....(that castle is familiar to each of us)

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 4:47:00 AM

    Craig congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:09:00 AM

    Very cool, This is an awesome poem! :)

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 1:47:00 PM

    Wow, never thought about a goldfish that way, Thanks and Congrats on this thoughtful creative write! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:56:00 PM

    very nice poem you penned here friend Craig..congratulations on your win :) hugs,Maria

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:30:00 AM

    wow, Craig, this one was very deep for a pet poem. I would have scored this top rate! Congrats on the winners' list. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:13:00 AM

    Congratulations on your HM Craig xx

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 3:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem - thanks for the nice contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:53:00 PM

    Craig, , CONGRATULATIONS :-) ON YOUR XOOL WINNING pet poem.. always~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:03:00 PM

    thanks 4 the support~LUV~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 5:49:00 PM

    WOW..Craig, you have lots of poems on the new list,,, hope you do not mind me reading them all... hope the goldfish get fed... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:17:00 PM

    What an imaginative poem! I've never read anything from the perspective of a goldfish :) An awesome, creative write! Officially a fave.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:54:00 PM

    Oh boy did you get me LOL..now Craig you can't have pet if you forget to feed it! Thanks for stopping by my blog Light & Love