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Abandoned

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Below is the poem entitled Abandoned which was written by poet Barbara Gorelick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Abandoned


Rusting old screen door Gateway to a once loved home Banging in the wind Echoing children's voices As they came and went each day
For the Tanka contest....

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:47:00 PM
    Really like this one Barbara

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:55:00 AM
    Congratulations Barbara love xx

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 8:42:00 PM
    Barbara :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:00:00 PM
    this one is sad but elegant. I love it, Barbara and congrats for your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:29:00 AM
    That door banging the wind. I'll never forget it. Great poem,

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 7:36:00 PM
    As always, excellent, BG! Best wishes for the contest. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:38:00 PM
    Barbara, this is an outstanding Tanka, I really enjoyed reading it, best of luck in the contest. Constance

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 12:25:00 PM
    My Dearest Most Only beLOVEd, Barbara Jean, Congratulations Good Luck LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry