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Pieces of a Letter

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Pieces of a Letter

Pieces of A Letter

Tonight is tonight that I
Find out where I stand
I’m nervous, shaking
Trembling in my hand
You kept telling me that between
Us things would get better
If this being the case
Explain these pieces of a letter

I found it on your night stand
Next to your bed
When I read it, it gave
Me a pain in my head
This guy said that with you
He had a good time
He made it sound sexy
And tried to rhyme

As I read these pieces
Of a letter
It hurt inside
Because I knew deep down 
To me you had lied
You made me feel alive
And always charmed
I have always kept you safe
And secure from harm.

It’s hurting me inside to think
Of you and him as being a pair
And the running of his
Fingers through your hair
When we were walking 
Barefoot through the sand
You could have told me
You had another man

When you tore up the letter
And left it by your bed
Did you do it to play me
And mess with my head?
My love for you goes deeper
Than the bottom of the sea
Now your lies and letter
Have all but destroyed me

Did you plan these pieces of
A letter so I could see
That all your life you
Wanted to be free?
I guess it’s over and
Nothing left to say
I guess I’ll move on and
Lick my wounds another day
You hurt me real bad, and
These tears I cannot hide
But at least I know now girl
How you really feel inside

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  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:15:00 AM
    heartbreaking but also an oppertunity to move on knowing you gave your best. I enjoyed this heartfelt write ;) tc Wilma

    Williams Avatar Lillie Williams
    Date: 12/13/2012 4:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Wilma. I have been away from Poetry soup for a little while, I had a lot of things going on, but now I am back and I thank you so much for your review, and your visit. Please come again.
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 1:27:00 PM
    Deep thoughts in a very well written poem - You write the basis of your heart Lillie. - Love it. - I wish you a good and relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Williams Avatar Lillie Williams
    Date: 12/13/2012 4:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Anne, thanks so much for your review. I enjoyed having you visit, so please feel free to visit any time.
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 5:19:00 AM
    this is truly a wonderful poem, yet it is of yourself, you write, you are very brave Lillie,to face up to your sad story this way, your sincerity and lovable faith really show through here.. again a wonderful poem, i wish you all the happiness you deserve, and i am sure you will find it.....

    Williams Avatar Lillie Williams
    Date: 12/7/2012 4:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Harry!! I appreciate you every time you visit. You are always welcome. :-)
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 10:52:00 AM
    This is very deep! All you can do is learn from this and move on. Though, its easy said than done. But try not to be too bitter to where you can't move on to the next person...enjoyed reading..regards INK-U-SCRIPT

    Williams Avatar Lillie Williams
    Date: 12/5/2012 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    God bless you Pace. Thanks so much for visiting my work. This is good advice.. Sometimes pain cause a set back and a react to it. Hopeful with enough time,the way will seem clearer. You are welcome back anytime, so please come again.