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A flame once burned

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A flame once burned

All I had to do was love her with all my heart and it would be OK.
I clung to her to save her life, as she wriggled.
Love, a propped up cardboard cutout,
Trust, her whipping boy
Hope, a bloodied and bruised up mess, with its eyes swollen shut. 
A flame once burned, my ray of hope; and she placed it beneath her spoon.

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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 9:11:00 AM

    This is a very sad and painful write. Full of sorrow and anguish.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:33:00 AM

    Hmmmm? This one really has me thinking? It's so sad,and painful...

    Irwin Avatar Luke Irwin Date: 12/7/2012 9:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Painful indeed. Thanks for reading.