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  1. Date: 4/7/2013 4:26:00 PM
    Very powerful and meaningful words sir. Excellent write, Always Becca

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:29:00 AM
    A beautifully sad poem which I extremely enjoyed reading this afternoon my dear friend David! Yes, parting is one of the most painful things in life especially of a very dear love one or child. Two thumbs up for this unique and outstanding verse my dear friend! Thank you so much for your sharing and your kind visit again on my poem especially my very first one. Have a great and blessed weekend! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 7:24:00 PM
    Heart wrenching...I lost a granddaughter. This brought tears to my eyes. The pain resurfaced. Great write!

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:10:00 PM
    Very well written David,, I thought it was you who lost a child,,, but I see it was for Holly. The feeling is not a good one at all. I know the feeling. I guess one learns to live with the memories.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:46:00 PM
    Your write is shattering. I can barely read this. Not that it isn't lovely, deep, it is just that I am reading my worst nightmare and one that I can not imagine surviving. There has been a great deal of horror in the news here, I am so raw with emotion I can no longer turn on the 'telly.' Type in Drummondville in google, you will understand. How? Why? When their are others who would rip their own hearts from their chests for their children? Bless you hon. Hugs to the Mrs. :) Cyndi

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:58:00 PM think this is just a piece of the way a parent might feel when loosing a child.i could never imagine, and hope to never know the feeling. but in your write, the message gives off a hint of beauty. (: ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:22:00 AM
    You have written from your heart so well my friend.. I share your emotions in this piece with you and Holly... Michael

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:14:00 AM
    Dear David - A pin-head of light enough? Not in my mind, nothing can ever be enough. You've captured the heart and soul of it. I hope you are well. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:32:00 PM
    Hi DAvid a touching write hit me hard thought of my lost grandson and I felt most of this you have penned brilliantly as always, have a great weekend my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:29:00 PM
    Here today, gone tomorrow. ME, here at the soup.(just stopped by cordially) and all of us take our breath for granted, ya know?......

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:26:00 PM
    Hi David, Thanks for the good thoughts on success, but really success isn't measured by money, unfortuantely, we need it to get by. This hit my heart, as I have had the loss of a child many years ago. Gods love is so tremendous, it is He that soothes the tears through Christ Jesus. Its hard. Got my heart on the floor.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 12:48:00 PM
    Hi Holly I tried to convey how I know you feel (or I think I know ), at the same time trying not to offend you, I am glad you like it and I do so want you to keep writing, I will always be here for you...and thank you to those people who have left very kind comments....David

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:42:00 AM
    Dear David, this poem has stabbed at my heart. Wonderfully crafted! Precious! Love & Peace.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:39:00 AM
    Very well done, this gnaws at the inner heart with such emotion, i just am without words, blessings for Holly and you, Carl

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:50:00 AM
    What could be worse than the death of a child. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 4:09:00 AM
    My dearest friend, have put my feelings on screen for myself and others who have had to endure such pain. It is the most beautiful poem of yours I've read. I search for the pin-head of light.. We've become good friends through this. You are a source of strength always encouraging me and giving me good advice. This poem encapsulates exactly how I feel. And, I know Joshua is proud of your talent. I'm sure he was reading it with me....Everything always...xxoo Holly Moore

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 2:21:00 PM
    Wow... This is extremely emotion provoking. I felt a lot when I read this, that is the mark of a talented poet. Beautiful write David :)

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:55:00 AM
    Thanks for commenting on my poem!! Wow I loved how this piece became a self reflection of who you are!! It was brilliantly done!! It really pulls the reader in and adds a twist to the loss you feel! Wow Amazing! Keep up the good work!

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 8:38:00 AM
    A very nice dedication for Holly. As they say for some reason God always takes the best. Now there is a new little angel in Heaven... Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Date: 12/7/2012 4:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That is such a sweet sentiment, Lucilla. I'm so lucky to have a friend like David. This poem..I'm at a loss for words...xxoo Holly Moore
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 6:01:00 AM
    Very emotional..and strong sentiments here.I wish i know who Holly hugj.i don t know her i got misty eyes.You reached my heart and soul.

    Date: 12/7/2012 4:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Charmaine, my name is Holly Moore. And, this poem is about my son. David has been an incredible friend. And now, he has outdone himself. He captured my heart in this poem. He is an incredible poet and human being...hugs Holly Moore