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The Fire

The fire Takes our home Old ice maker In the garage still works Makes ice Tears flow As we drink Sweetened iced tea In new glasses given By friends
Sponsor: Carol Sunshine Brown Contest: Fire And Ice Cinqku form Written by: Sara Kendrick This fourth day of December, 2012 Click on "About This Poem"

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  1. Date: 12/21/2012 11:26:00 AM

    Short and wonderful piece,Sara...Congrats on your super win in this contest....

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 6:36:00 AM

    A cute and touching write, Congrats, Sara!! Jag

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:48:00 AM

    Excellent poem and form! i love it! Congratulations on your awesome win my very dear friend, Sara! love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:00:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Sara love xx

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:46:00 AM

    Congratulations my friend Sara on your fantastic win. Wishing you a blessed Christmas. Hugs/Love Maria

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 1:09:00 AM

    I wish this is an imaginative poem of yours. Almost frightening reality and how well penned. Felicitations :-) Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 12:40:00 AM

    Congrats Sara on your win :D it is gorgeous :) - wishing you a wonderful and a great day

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 11:54:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, Mehnaz

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 8:42:00 PM

    Sara, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 5:00:00 PM

    Glad to see this one on the list, Sara. BIG congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 1:52:00 PM

    Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Sara. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:10:00 AM

    the moment you get home after a sunny day..and then finally a cold drink. :) sounds refreshing, hope you're morning is going great, Sara. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:44:00 AM

    masterful I'd say and I'm so glad it was not your house, although the neighbor may not say so. So inventively told.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:02:00 AM

    Oh this is brilliant Sara, i've read many for this contest, this is the best by far... but that is only my opinion,,, but yes i love this....

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 9:14:00 PM

    Carol, is going to love this one Sara.......... however I hope the fire you are talking about is the sun,,, making you hot.... enjoyed the tea... thank you..pd

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 4:43:00 PM

    I just read the about poem part. Yes, I see now.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:46:00 PM

    what a most interesting way to combine the ideas of fire and ice. Was it true that this happened? clever!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:41:00 PM

    I like the sentiment here and the way it strings together - glad it wasn't a true story for you. Now I'm going to see how to write a cinqku, john

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:35:00 PM

    Very creative idea luv for Carol's contest. Enjoyed your poem today. Hope you are doing OK. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 6:26:00 PM

    This really is a sad write, but it is so very brilliantly written my friend! I'm glad to see you try the Cinqku again! It's a tough form, but quite effective when done correctly as you have done here! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!