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Questionku

Jet engine died

   Pilot hit the silk

      Will the chute save his hide?

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 1 in Richard Lamoureux's "Questionku" Contest - December 2012

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  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:59:00 AM

    Interesting concept! very creative. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 3:28:00 PM

    good one!!!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 1:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on your meg win Robert xx

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 1:22:00 AM

    Well done Bob! congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 10:23:00 PM

    Congrats on your first place win. I really enjoyed your Questionku

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 11:37:00 AM

    I hope so! LOL... Nice one.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 1:13:00 PM

    Let's hope it wilk. :) Good one Bob. Good luck!

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:37:00 PM

    Written from experience perhaps? However you came by your inspiration for this one, it worked(the chute too I hope). I like your words, good luck with the contest. Read. ;{>

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:27:00 PM

    LOL [old coot/looses shoot--waterlanding?] HUGS!! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:49:00 PM

    I say YES IT WILL!! Just pull the cord, Bob. PULL THE CORD!! hahah....I think this is supremo! gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 6:36:00 PM

    love it! :)

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:22:00 PM

    Hello Robert, love the idea of this contest...glad to see you enter Richard's contest... hope the chute opens... always~pdkmv9

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:09:00 PM

    I sure hope so, love your air borne haiku Robert, xxx Rose

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:07:00 PM

    Spot on. Great, succinct question Q. Enjoyed...John

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 3:43:00 PM

    Ha ha, this would definitely be his question when the time arises! What a perfect entry into Richard's contest! You will do awesome in the contest! I look to see you in the winners list my friend! Great Work!!