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  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:46:00 PM
    A very interesting poem. Jancarl

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:39:00 PM
    Some very colorful lines. I had trouble with the rhythm of some of the lines but you painted a great picture.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 3:30:00 PM
    I had to look up liquescent - great word. Liked your exploration through the color wheel of emotion. Personally I like the bright colors, but often get burned - sends me back to ashes...gray. Enjoyed this...John