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Writers gift

read the lines
see the space in between
unwrap each word
hear their rhythm
feel their beat
listen to the hymn of rhyme 

inhale the feeling
of newborn synthesis
a startling raid
settling down
in intimate corners
of your mind 

every moment
brand-new views
breathtaking 
readmissions

introspective shifts
of inner and outer movements
breathtaking eternal chips
causing perpetual motions
of emotions deep inside 

©Ellie Daphne  


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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 6:20:00 PM

    Great winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:33:00 PM

    Congrats, Ellie. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 12:54:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win...David

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:46:00 AM

    Congratulation on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:52:00 PM

    Ellie.. CONGRATULATIONS, with this awesome poem about YOU :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 4:11:00 PM

    wow, what an imaginative way to describe the writing process. WeLL DONE.

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/6/2012 5:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WeLL :-) - TY Andrea!!!!!!!!!!
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:19:00 PM

    This is a fantastic write, Ellie! You describe the writer's mind amazingly well. I love the stream of consciousness feel of this poem.

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/5/2012 1:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It was what and how I feel when reading a poem I relate to.......... TY TY Ellie Dahpne
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 9:55:00 AM

    Ellie excellent crafted words you have here, well done...David

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/5/2012 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hear tfelt TY David!
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 4:45:00 AM

    Ellie written with a perception of a poet. Mastering uniquely penned words that make the reader look beyond the words and feel emotions evoked from the poets inner being. It sounds like a win. Warm blessings, Connie

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/5/2012 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Words making me silent. TY TY Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:02:00 AM

    Every word has it's own secret name that only comes to light when bound with it's fellows. You certainly know their secrets, great words. David Nickle Read ;{>

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/5/2012 1:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I've written you a personal message. But again. Thank you so much!