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  1. Date: 2/19/2013 7:51:00 AM
    Magnificent!! This is one just like I wish I could write. Great poetic and story-telling talent is displayed here.... Jake.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Love it ,, so magical,, I have a poem called The Midnight Sun" nothing like this, though ;} going to favorite's ;}

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 10:07:00 AM
    I'm sorry I missed this one, John.... I believe this was posted about the time I was researching family records needed for writing "Tige." I was really shaken by some of the things I discovered.. I'm just gonna leave well enough alone...... Good luck in all your endeavors..... Jake

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 11:17:00 AM
    Your savages keep getting better and better... Loved this one... but I also love them all. Your friend...

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 3:49:00 PM
    That's one heck of a good tale, I really enjoyed it hope you will be entering my new contest. Light & love

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 9:39:00 AM
    What an interesting story. THank-you for reading my Prose Poem 1.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 8:44:00 AM
    Thanks for stopping by my work..I hope that you do look up Cinqku and write us a few...Enjoyed reading you very imaginative today..Sara

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    Date: 12/5/2012 8:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Soup mail soon..Sara
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 12:05:00 AM
    That was a great tale you wrote there..An update to an old Santa tale that has been going round for years. I can't wait to see what else you have stored away in that head of yours.Great write my friend. :o) I read the whole thing with a smile.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:25:00 PM
    Creative story what an imagination, looking forward to the sequel John, and remember the hot chocolate was served shaken not stirred, yum!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 11:32:00 AM
    John, a very interesting tale... just great for this time of year... I hope it is continued soon! Terry

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 10:42:00 AM
    Well John all I can say is thank goodness for rainy days xx