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Norwegian Tanka

Norwegian Tanka 

This day had sunlight 
Light shone through small windows
My office was a stable
The beast of burdens´ air reminds me 
That my work is not yet done.



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  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:50:00 PM

    ;-)...pd

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 12/5/2012 3:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks destroyer
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:55:00 AM

    a simple smile here. love, Kathy

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 12/4/2012 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Kathy
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 6:05:00 AM

    Thank you ... then I learned something new today ...... But tell me .... is there any difference? Your "Norwegian Tanka" is at least well written. Have a great first week in December. oxox / / Anne-Lise ... (Norway) :)

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 12/4/2012 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No Anne I didn~t get the tanka quite right so I cheated a little by calling it Norwegian tanka