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The Dream Captured

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Below is the poem entitled The Dream Captured which was written by poet Yanny Widjanarko. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Dream Captured

A deep sleep guided me to the land of quizzical
Where the hallucination acted immortal as the souls from delusional
Those who ever filled the classic story of our time
Declared their presence in the shackles of uncertainty

I embraced my desire within
I found my anguish bloomed betwixt
I sank into the soul of crisis
Sensing the seconds of my fragility

Those lifeless souls grasp me there
Grasp depth as they would never be seen, again
A moment I was awakened from the dream
Along with the shadow which deserted to be fade

And the sense still there.. obscure...
My longing which buried by despair
Melting as the tears fell down
And let the dots of my dream be a dwelling place for my stained soul 

And let those retentions sealed in every pieces of the journey



Author's Note:
For the deceased beloved Father (November 13, 2002)
For the deceased beloved Sister (February 27, 2011)

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  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:01:00 PM
    your grief is really felt here. Such a sad poem and so poetic, Yanny. i enjoyed also what you said to me about snow.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:25:00 PM
    Yanny, a heartfelt poem.. thank you for sharing this awesome poem. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. Hope to read more of your poems tomorrow. take care~:-) LINDA

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/4/2012 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda your visits always brings new spirit for me :), I hope you have a wonderful day as well
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 12:24:00 PM
    Wow, this is powerful! so sorry for your loss. Your poem is exquisite, you are getting better and better. So pleased to be the first to comment on this beautiful piece.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/4/2012 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard, if it's not because of the poetry soup I will not as improved as now :), people in here inspired me a lot and ecourage me to write more included you :D