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Debbie Guzzi
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haiku 27
the brook bubbles toward the distant lake -- stones glisten
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bl devnath
Date: 12/10/2012 8:54:00 AM
Cute one enjoyed. Sometimes I do mistake because I am trying. Thanks for your suggestion. Loved always, bl
harry horsman
Date: 12/8/2012 7:29:00 AM
this is so good for the immagination Debbie...
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2012 1:15:00 AM
Why do you have two Haiku 27s???
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 12/6/2012 5:56:00 AM
cause I can't count LOL
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/5/2012 2:39:00 PM
your the best haiku master..pd
kathryn collins
Date: 12/5/2012 7:34:00 AM
I see it now on a crisp fall day.
S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 12/5/2012 6:57:00 AM
Thanks for my placement in the kindle the lights contest!! Jag
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 12/4/2012 8:59:00 PM
a perfect scene of quiet calm solitude in this haiku Debbie .. thankxx for my HM in lights .. now checking out your new contest luv ..there is no form listed for Rondolet .. which form shall we use to enter?
Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2012 2:49:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your nature scene..I bet that water is icy cold this time of year but beautiful..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 2:30:00 PM
Very pretty picture, I can almost feel ice melting into the stream in early spring.
Owen Yeates
Date: 12/4/2012 11:44:00 AM
Hi Debbie how beautiful a picture you paint with this haiku lovely indeed, thanks fror your comment on my work cannot draw though sorry, all the best Owen
David Williams
Date: 12/4/2012 11:42:00 AM
Debbie great image, don't know if you went back and read my reply to your question, but don't think I am a saint I just love to help people, the one big thing I would love to improve is getting rid all the rubbish that constantly swims in my head!!!!!GGrrr
Constance La France
Date: 12/4/2012 8:48:00 AM
Debbie, this is a beautiful haiku, so visual and well done. Constance
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/4/2012 8:00:00 AM
Beautiful one, Debs!
Yesha Shah
Date: 12/4/2012 7:23:00 AM
your haiku is filled with such beautiful imagery Debbie. enjoyed one more haiku from your ever flowing stream of poetry.
Anne Rutherford
Date: 12/4/2012 5:22:00 AM
I see you beside a brook and thinking this awesome Haiku Debbie. That is what came to me as I read it. xx Anne
Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 12/4/2012 4:59:00 AM
Each word and each line tells the beauty of the scene sketched by you in this superb Haiku. Great and beautiful write like the beauty of a lovely brook on a serene hills and thank my friend for your precious words on my PINK PINK PINK poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K .....Debbie Guzzi
Rollo West
Date: 12/3/2012 10:24:00 PM
Hi Debbie, what a great read this, full of all kinds of images. Rollo
Mystic Rose
Date: 12/3/2012 7:45:00 PM
A nature peek, how nice, Rose xxx
Catie Lindsey
Date: 12/3/2012 7:25:00 PM
an excellent haiku, Deb. I see you've included two of your senses, very nice. a modern haiku, done very well. hugs, Catie :)
Russell Sivey
Date: 12/3/2012 7:23:00 PM
I can see you really are the master of Haiku here on the Soup, this is an incredible poem my friend! You have written a stupendous and wondrous write Debbie! I loved reading every line of this illustrious piece, Great Work!!
