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The Waking up of the Extremis - Act Three

Continuation…

ACT THREE
Scene one
[At the morgue.
[Mortuary attendants pulling bodies while eating burgers. 
Atharia, disgusted, wanders off. Sees doctor with
chief  mortuary attendant. Overhears their conversation.]


[Mortuary attendant]: dead bodies all stitched up and powdered well without suspicion hope it rains the smell from the mass graves is starting to choke what a shame a government without burial grounds [Doctor]: get vehicle the organs are ready for transportation [mortuary attendant leaves. The doctor notices Atharia and goes to her.] [Atharia]: Don’t you dare say a word. Your game is up. You are but a doctor of corruption. [Doctor laughs] [Doctor]: And what exactly am I accused of? Disposing of dead bodies in a safe environment? Read the news. The government knows the cemeteries are full. Ah! But it isn’t their problem, is it? Who do you think has to bury their dead in public cemeteries? Not politicians! Go figure! ‘The dead are conscious of nothing at all’ And yet we cling on to their bodies and shun possibilities. Speak the word cremation – And a cold shudder passes over the earth as citizens cringe. Religious leaders bay for blood and call for resignations. Traditionalists call on culture to protest the act. But whose culture I ask you? Surely, not of a people who only till recently left their ill relatives in the forest to die. Open your eyes The world is changing. You can’t hold on to fanciful ideals anymore. [Atharia]: FANCIFUL IDEALS!!! How dare you make fun of morality and accuse culture of triviality? You see the dead and dismiss them as an end. But what of the living, should they not be appeased? One cannot claim to respect life and dismiss death in the search of possibilities. The cloak of darkness hides your misgivings but daylight uncovers their wrath. See there, the woman crying for her only child standing by his grave? Can you look her in her eye and tell her, her son’s resting place is now occupied by another? Who gives you the right to take that decision away from her? In the search of ‘possibilities’ doctor, You cannot ignore the glare of morality. And what do you think will happen when she finds out you mutilated his inward parts? What will you do then, doctor? Will you show her the statistics? [Doctor]: Enough! You cannot be allowed to disrupt the paradigm. [Doctor presses hard on Atharia’s neck. Atharia becomes unconscious. Mortuary attendant arrives with vehicle and they put Atharia inside]. To be continued….

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  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:24:00 PM

    quite a challenge writing dramatic poetry like this! I compliment you on your originality and courage. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:38:00 AM

    Vicky your words here are so true. Things like this are happening all over and people are not aware. It is time we wake up. Here where I live maybe 15 miles away. My ex boss had her mom buried some years back. two years ago she went to visit and found other people where her mom was suppose to be. They said their reletive was there. Up to now my ex boss has not found her mom. Nobody knows what happened. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 12/9/2012 1:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thai is SAD! The things that go on in this world are daunting.
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:23:00 AM

    Vicky - I feel the hands on Atharia's and cry at the "system." No cry for victims dead to scalpels and shovels and disinterment. Heartless and greedy the people in charge. Vicky you have written such impact into your lines and despondency with no relief. I want to say I'm looking forward to the next act and wish it could be in real life hopeful. what a stunning piece writing. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:05:00 AM

    Hello Vicky, Great write....thoughts and images so profound...almost can see everything through your words...keep it up... love,Mehnaz

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:48:00 PM

    you write great poetry Vicky..good to read your work..take care..have a nice weekend.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 6:30:00 PM

    Yikes...I do think too much importance is placed on the body of the dead though.. BUt yikes where are you going with this..Pet cemetary? HUGS L & L

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 12:40:00 PM

    What happens to Atharia, Vicky? id love to know, creative mix of genre in this scene; i love it-Lucas-

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 12/5/2012 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'll write a follow-up soon. stay tuned.
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 5:31:00 AM

    Amazing write. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 6:42:00 PM

    I'm sorry this is hard for me to read. I'm going to make another selection. I'm sure it's wonderful, but it's too close to home right now ok? Love, Holly

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 12/4/2012 10:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm sorry Holly,I didn't want you to read this.
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Amazing Vicky xx

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 10:20:00 AM

    Wonderful write Vicky, enjoyed it, love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 6:48:00 AM

    You have my respect and admiration, you have talked a large topic in a way that I feel only you could have done based on your unique perspective of your environment. In the process you have illuminated a problem that most of the world is ignorant of. This is no small accomplishment. You should be proud of this work. I am certainly proud of you.

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 12/4/2012 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard. You've been amazing.
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 4:37:00 PM

    Hi Vicky, I'm afraid I'm not too familiar with endeavour of yours, so I can't really 'critique' your work. However, I can say that the first three parts are well written... you've kept my attention, my interest... I've enjoyed the first 3 parts and anxiously await the continuation... I especially like the questions about our society that your are raising and wonder what the answers might turn out to be... Terry

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 12/3/2012 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Terry, it's new to me also. I'm trying to do 'verse drama', ie poetic drama, kinda like a play but in poetry.