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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:25:00 AM

    I like this. I'm going on to the next one. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 12:27:00 PM

    hi, Vicky very disturbing images from this scene, keep the play on,-Lucas-

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 6:40:00 PM

    Captivating...still reading! Love, Holly

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 6:39:00 AM

    Description of scene doesn't make complete sense. If body is sawn up the family would know that the body had been tampered with. I would just leave that line out. Otherwise it is a powerful act.

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 12/4/2012 10:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Richard you're right!!! I didn't even see it. I had a different image in mind. I could make the excuse that English is not my first language but I have no excuse. Thanks.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2012 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The term Sawn up could mean something different than what you meant. When I think sawn up I imagine limbs being cut off.
    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 12/4/2012 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey, you've brought out a valid question. The society talked about here has a culture embedded in the fear of the dead, i.e, they'd sooner run away than view a body even for a second. It is their fear that works well for the doctor. (But just in case one dares to look closely I guess the doctor will have to cover his tracks). Richard... Thank you.