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My Promise

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My Promise

From the very first day
I had to have you
You looked my way
And I just knew

Your smile caught my attention
Your words drew me in
You left me in suspension
Now I’m happier than I’ve ever been

I’ll never leave your side
I’ll never hide away
Even if you died
I would never betray

I’m here for good
I’ll never leave
Like a good wife should
I won’t deceive

Take this as a dedication
Of my love to you
I have no hesitation
When I promise my love to you

Written in October 2012

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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 4:06:00 PM
    A lovely declaration of devotion. Congrats on your win, Lily! Love, Kim

    Mayfield Avatar Lily Mayfield
    Date: 4/1/2013 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, Kim! - Love, Lily
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Congrats, Lily. Beautiful Well done. hugs, Ralph

    Mayfield Avatar Lily Mayfield
    Date: 4/1/2013 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Ralph!!! -Love, Lily
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 10:55:00 PM
    Lily, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA

    Mayfield Avatar Lily Mayfield
    Date: 4/1/2013 8:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And as always, thank you, Linda :) -Love, Lily
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 10:47:00 AM
    nice poem really a delight

    Mayfield Avatar Lily Mayfield
    Date: 4/1/2013 8:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Mr. Bell :) - Love, Lily