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  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:35:00 PM
    Nice featured poem~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:40:00 AM
    infinitor II , :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 12:58:00 PM
    It is nice to see the way you changed the poem. wish I would have read it the way you intended the poem the first time. ;-/maybe I would have liked it better. who knows! it is nice what you did to please others. welcome to the soup. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:35:00 PM
    It does seem more complete more finished now..kind of you to accept my help. Light & Love [Keep them coming]

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:27:00 AM
    Welcome to soup, I enjoyed your write very much. I love this I am a sucker for a good tale, I have read it 3 know I think you'd be better off starting with verse 2, which sets the stage better. I love the repetition! maybe make verse 1 verse 3 & deleteing the repeated line you now have in verse 4 keep the last 2 lines & look at it as a sonnet? Just some thoughts? [I hope you will consider giving me 6 lines for my Contest..check out member contests] Light & Love

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