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JUST NOW,it happened again

JUST NOW, it happened again

A fresh wave surged,
and left,
a meteor breaking into pieces,
fragments in millions,
bright , 
showering down
from outer space.
Ah, momentarily purged.

A  bubble  of hope again, 
But I  still slump here,
Churned down
teeming with thoughts so 
grotesque 
and earthly...

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:56:00 PM

    Mehnaz, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) it has been an honor spotting your poem on the soups home page. Take care, and have yourself a lovely- GOODNIGHT **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:05:00 AM

    ‡ Sounds In This Poem As If Your Precious Heart May Be Cast Amid A Bit Of Depression Perhaps, Sweet Beautiful Mehnaz ˜ Surely One Can Relate As Understand Once They Have Tasted The Beauty In Spirit To Face This Flesh ? Albeit Shall They Twine A Moment Divine A Meteor, Exploding Within The Celsetial Skies ˜ Congratulations, Upon Your Beauty's Features Verse ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 2:43:00 PM

    Nice to read your work today,Mehnaz Light & Love

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 12/29/2012 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank YOu...
  1. Date: 12/2/2012 8:39:00 AM

    Mehnaz I like this a lot, it has lots of body....David

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 12/2/2012 9:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank u so much ... Being new to the Soup I am encouraged a lot by ur words and ur write. I am exploring all the great talents like u out here. Thanks for stopping by. ... Mehnaz
  1. Date: 12/2/2012 8:36:00 AM

    Very good piece... much enjoyed... Michael

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 12/2/2012 9:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David. It's truly inspiring to be encouraged by writers like u. .... Mehnaz.