Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer


Comments Inbox

 

A Heart's Paradox

White hat black cat par, enigmas...
Precious the innocent young child
Seven or eight; shyly,  as curiously
Peeking around,  the opened door
An image birthing wings of flight ?
Scrambling to unravel, this maze...
Recapture a purity which lived; try
Making sense; love's, what's why's.

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 3:36:00 AM

    Beautiful write Rachel! Childhood is the essence of innonence, a time of discovery and learning without judgment.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:56:00 AM

    I peeked around and found this lovely poem complete with cats children wings and mazes.

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 6:36:00 PM

    I love the title, I love the content, I love your poetry full bodied, this is a different perspective of yours dear Rachel, and I love the density sides of your little precious moment, Have a wonderful and pleasant week too Rachel- Big Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 2:58:00 PM

    I agree with the comments from L.M. - Children are not children like we was before ....... (mini adults). - When I think back ..... Childhood memories .... it is so important to: be children! - A very well written poem Rachel! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 1:06:00 PM

    Dear Rachel, these few words capture a world when innocence is lost, gone forever... Anyway, hope you're doing well. I'm enjoying a quiet B'day... no big fanfare...my preference... Happy, but bored with the food, noise, etc.! Love, annalise

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 8:15:00 AM

    children struggle with much these days growing up too fast and not enjoying being a child .. nicely crafted poetry profounding emotion Rachel luv..