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- Haiku - X 8 - Winter -


                                         
                                          A haven full of stars
                                Frozen ground is covered with snow
                                         The winter has arrived                            

                                         
                                         Freezing snow crystals
                                      fall softly down on my nose
                                             Why do they melt








02.12.2012
A-L  Andresen ::

       *   03.12.2012 - I have re- write this haiku to "Winter" - not for the contest!

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  1. Date: 12/13/2012 11:25:00 AM

    oh, how perfectly still i feel after reading this. Lovely!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/14/2012 6:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Don. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 11:00:00 AM

    loved the re-write as well Anne....

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/6/2012 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Yesha. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 9:36:00 AM

    What a lovely haiku. It may be "Winter," But this haiku somehow warmed me. Take care, Jancarl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 10:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your warm words - happy to see you Jancarl. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:27:00 AM

    This is a very lovely and fascinating haiku I enjoyed reading from you my dear friend and favorite poet, Annde-Lise. Two thumbs up for this wonderful gem! It reminds me of a beautiful season which is now here but I wish we have snow in our place. Thank you so much for sharing and your very inspiring comment on my latest poem. Advance Merry Christmas! love always, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is not for the contest Leonora - I hope to see you again before Christmas. - Thank you for your words - happy to see you . :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:14:00 AM

    Anne, this is very nice reading on your haiku x2. I suggest you drop the "s" on FALLS in this part following the plural in crystals: Freezing snow crystals falls softly down on my nose Thanks for your comments on my Light entry win

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 6:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ok. - Thank you James ! :)
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you James. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 5:18:00 AM

    Amazing. A heartfelt write. Enjoyed. Tfs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 5:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Ravi. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 4:51:00 AM

    Anne I loved this winter write. It's a realism of winter's cold. Warm smiles, Connie

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 5:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Connie. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 3:58:00 AM

    Angother beauty from you, enjoyed!! Ja

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 5:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Jag. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:21:00 AM

    what a heartfelt write Anne Lise..thank you for sharing your beautiful tribute...<3<3<3 SK

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 2:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Sukmawati. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:58:00 PM

    Nice Haiku. They melt because your body is warm, but it's nice to see them fall. Thanks for sharing. Good night. Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 1:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Lucilla. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:43:00 PM

    This is very beautiful..thank you for commenting on my page! xxoo Holly

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 1:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Holly. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:44:00 PM

    Anne, watch out for the haiku police...LOL...love this.....thank you for sharing..always~LINDA

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 1:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ....lol.. :) Thank you for your words - happy to see you Linda. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:46:00 PM

    oh, you have got yourself a questionku with that second one!!! COOL.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/4/2012 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    NOT APPROVED,Andrea. :=) Thank you for your words - happy to see you . :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 11:49:00 AM

    Hi Anne Lise waiting for the snow here, loved the haiku's though, all the best Owen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/4/2012 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Owen. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:10:00 AM

    Anne-Lise, lovely winter haikus, we had snow here in Canada recently, just like you describe. Constance

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/4/2012 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Consrance :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:53:00 AM

    The stars are so clear. Wonderful haiku Anne Lise. love, Kathy

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/4/2012 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Kathryn :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:13:00 PM

    You still owe me a Questionku, looking forward to see what you come up with. Have a nice evening.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/4/2012 2:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Richard :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 3:19:00 PM

    oh to be in Norway,,, love these...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WELKOMMEN TO SNOW AND MINUS DEGREES,HARRY!! Thank you for your words - happy to see you :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 3:14:00 PM

    really love haiku, Anne-Lise

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 3:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you Jack :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 10:43:00 AM

    Melting is how snowflakes die.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 10:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your words - happy to see you John :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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