- Haiku - X 8 - Winter - by Anne Lise Andresen

don munro

Date: 12/13/2012 11:25:00 AM

oh, how perfectly still i feel after reading this. Lovely!

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/14/2012 6:29:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Don. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yesha Shah

Date: 12/6/2012 11:00:00 AM

loved the re-write as well Anne....

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/6/2012 11:27:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Yesha. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jancarl Campi

Date: 12/5/2012 9:36:00 AM

What a lovely haiku. It may be "Winter," But this haiku somehow warmed me. Take care, Jancarl

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 10:03:00 AM

Thank you for your warm words - happy to see you Jancarl. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Date: 12/5/2012 6:27:00 AM

This is a very lovely and fascinating haiku I enjoyed reading from you my dear friend and favorite poet, Annde-Lise. Two thumbs up for this wonderful gem! It reminds me of a beautiful season which is now here but I wish we have snow in our place. Thank you so much for sharing and your very inspiring comment on my latest poem. Advance Merry Christmas! love always, Leonora

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 6:30:00 AM

It is not for the contest Leonora - I hope to see you again before Christmas. - Thank you for your words - happy to see you . :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

James Tate

Date: 12/5/2012 6:14:00 AM

Anne, this is very nice reading on your haiku x2. I suggest you drop the "s" on FALLS in this part following the plural in crystals: Freezing snow crystals falls softly down on my nose Thanks for your comments on my Light entry win

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 6:20:00 AM

Ok. - Thank you James ! :)

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 6:17:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you James. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/5/2012 5:18:00 AM

Amazing. A heartfelt write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 5:53:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Ravi. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 12/5/2012 4:51:00 AM

Anne I loved this winter write. It's a realism of winter's cold. Warm smiles, Connie

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 5:53:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Connie. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 12/5/2012 3:58:00 AM

Angother beauty from you, enjoyed!! Ja

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 5:52:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Jag. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 12/5/2012 2:21:00 AM

what a heartfelt write Anne Lise..thank you for sharing your beautiful tribute...<3<3<3 SK

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 2:40:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Sukmawati. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 12/4/2012 9:58:00 PM

Nice Haiku. They melt because your body is warm, but it's nice to see them fall. Thanks for sharing. Good night. Lucilla

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 1:47:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Lucilla. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

HOLLY MOORE

Date: 12/4/2012 7:43:00 PM

This is very beautiful..thank you for commenting on my page! xxoo Holly

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 1:47:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Holly. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2012 5:44:00 PM

Anne, watch out for the haiku police...LOL...love this.....thank you for sharing..always~LINDA

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 1:46:00 AM

....lol.. :) Thank you for your words - happy to see you Linda. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2012 1:46:00 PM

oh, you have got yourself a questionku with that second one!!! COOL.

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/4/2012 1:49:00 PM

NOT APPROVED,Andrea. :=) Thank you for your words - happy to see you . :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Owen Yeates

Date: 12/4/2012 11:49:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise waiting for the snow here, loved the haiku's though, all the best Owen

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/4/2012 11:52:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Owen. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

yasmin khan

Date: 12/4/2012 10:40:00 AM

I want to see the snow Anna..doesn't snow in mumbai, but i really enjoyed your haiku..

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/4/2012 10:44:00 AM

I'll send you a bag full of snow, Yasmin. - Thank you for your words - happy to see you . :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 12/4/2012 8:10:00 AM

Anne-Lise, lovely winter haikus, we had snow here in Canada recently, just like you describe. Constance

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/4/2012 10:11:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Consrance :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

kathryn collins

Date: 12/4/2012 7:53:00 AM

The stars are so clear. Wonderful haiku Anne Lise. love, Kathy

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/4/2012 10:11:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Kathryn :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/3/2012 6:13:00 PM

You still owe me a Questionku, looking forward to see what you come up with. Have a nice evening.

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/4/2012 2:10:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Richard :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

harry horsman

Date: 12/3/2012 3:19:00 PM

oh to be in Norway,,, love these...

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 3:22:00 PM

WELKOMMEN TO SNOW AND MINUS DEGREES,HARRY!! Thank you for your words - happy to see you :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

jack horne

Date: 12/3/2012 3:14:00 PM

really love haiku, Anne-Lise

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 3:17:00 PM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Jack :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

John Loving III

Date: 12/3/2012 10:43:00 AM

Melting is how snowflakes die.

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 10:45:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you John :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yesha Shah

Date: 12/3/2012 7:26:00 AM

lovely questionku. It melts probably becoz you are a warm and loving person Anne. Good luck with the contest.

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 10:11:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Yesha:)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/3/2012 7:22:00 AM

LOL because your nose is hot like rudolph?? [a freezing snow crystal/falls softly down my nose -- Dad's Hanky] so nice to read your work to start the day..Light & Love

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 10:10:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Debbie:)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2012 5:45:00 AM

Great one..If for a contest, will be a winner...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 6:10:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Sara :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/2/2012 8:29:00 PM

Brilliant, a simply brilliant write m friend! I really enjoyed reading it this evening, Great Work!!

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 1:38:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/2/2012 8:08:00 PM

Let's face it--you must be hot!

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 1:38:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 12/2/2012 5:42:00 PM

‡ I Wish To Let Your Beauty Know That I Find It An Honour, To Be Visited By Your Loveliness As, Also To View Your Precious Heart's Poetry, Sweet Beautiful AnneLise ˜ For You Are Such A Loving Kind Lady With Such Wonderfulness Within Your Treasures! Tis Why I Believe Also The Snow Melts Upon Your Pretty Little Nose ˜ Because You Are Sooo Warm And Your Beauty's Radiance Glows A Flameful Light In Splendours! Thank You For Your Beautiful Visit I Agree ˜ 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 1:37:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/2/2012 5:25:00 PM

Snow has its beauty which have to be end, similarly with beauty, beauty has its own time to bloom and gone, for being mortal is the beauty itself; I love your cute questionku they are inspiring :), thank you for your lovely supports through the comments on my pages, they are really lovely and encouraging, have a wonderful week too Anne :)- Hug, Yanny

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 1:48:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 12/2/2012 4:22:00 PM

You can melt anything, Anne-Lise :) Cute Haiku. Hope you win. Love ya, Toquyen

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 1:36:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Annalise Brigham

Date: 12/2/2012 1:31:00 PM

Lovely "Questionku" dear Anne! It this i for a contest, my very best wishes for a win. I love the imagery. Hope your weekend was fun! Love, annalise

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/2/2012 1:38:00 PM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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