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A Real Keeper

... dedicated to my devlish 10 year old grandson!


There's only one way to describe me
Can't wipe off this silly ole grin
A ravishing beauty I've turned out to be
With such gorgeous baby soft skin

With a face of unmatched perfection
Like Clooney and Pitt into one
Movie star stuff, there's really no doubt
Pure awesomeness second to none

It may seem a trifle bit pompous of me
But I'm such a ravishing hunk
Sorry but I can't even stand it myself
Pay no attention to the tabloid junk

I try to lead this exemplary life
In spite of this girlie adoration
A lesser person would certainly succumb
Causing a large brain inflation

Inside I'm really quite a nice young lad
You just need to delve a bit deeper
My surface beauty will surely distract you
But most say I'm a real keeper!


© Jack Ellison 2012


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  1. Date: 12/2/2012 11:14:00 AM

    Absolutely amazing write... My son is 21 and still thinks he fits this description... LOL

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/2/2012 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL Don't they all! How's today going so far... hope it's a good one! Love and warm hugs, Jack xox
  1. Date: 12/2/2012 4:23:00 AM

    Aaaaw Jack this is definitely a keeper poem....I can just imagine this adorable little boy.....being such a cheeky one!........lol gr8 poem - Shaz

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/2/2012 4:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love that word 'cheeky'... where did it originate? Will have to look it up! Happy you liked it Shaz... love and huge hugs, Jack xox
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 5:36:00 PM

    How did he like this poem??? As for me I thought it fun!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/1/2012 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Loved it but didn't particularly like the line... "a ravishing beauty"... don't know why! LOL
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 10:27:00 AM

    Ha, ha. So cute. Love it, Jack. He sounds good. Love ya, Toquyen

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/1/2012 6:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    He's a charmer! Love him bunches... thanks for dropping by my sweet friend! Love Jack xox