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BEGIN TOO SHINE

How many times 

i have passed counting 

my fingers on my hand 

does everything take so long 

waiting is all you do. 

Feeling will it be me 

waiting you see pass darken days 

sitting in shadows walking but not your steps. 

Then you open your heart 

a from here your light begins too shine.

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  1. Date: 11/30/2012 10:12:00 PM

    ‡ Your Welcome, Sweet Beautiful Dawn! Thank You Also Twas Pure Joy, In Your Beauty's Kind Visit! I Am A Bit Weary Right Now And Preparing For Bed. I Love To Sleep Naked But Its A Tad Nippy Tonight. I Was Thinking About Laying In Front Of The Fireplace, Sipping A Bit Of Wine Until I Fade Away ? Sweet Dreams To You And Thanks Again, For Your Lovely Light In Com. 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 9:25:00 PM

    ‡ One Look In Your Beautiful Oceans Eyes, Sweet Beautiful Dawn, Anyone, Would Fall In Love With 'You!' Sooo I Am Quite Amazed As Unto Why A Poem Such As This By Your Beautiful Precious Heart, Would Should Or Ever Be A Need, That It Be Written ? Once More, Tis Wonderful Beholding Your Loveliness Here At Priceless PoetrySoup Again! 'Have A Very Beautiful Day Over There In Beautiful England.' My Love, Always, Rachel *