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leaves and cherry blossoms

Leaves scatter softly 
like waves on the open sea
they make me happy


The cherry blossoms
falling like cotton bounty
I gaze with much joy

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  1. Date: 12/2/2012 11:28:00 AM

    My friend, this is a free flowing well written haiku. It's great to read one like this. Some of mine seem awkward.... Well done..... Jake

    Toledo Avatar Elenushka Toledo Date: 12/2/2012 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you my friend John. I will read you too?
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:31:00 PM

    Elenushka, really a great read with these Haikus. Rollo

    Toledo Avatar Elenushka Toledo Date: 12/2/2012 11:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rollo. I will read you. ?
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:01:00 PM

    Lovely haiku, Elenushka !!!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Toledo Avatar Elenushka Toledo Date: 11/30/2012 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne, I want to focus in writing positive poems. I have a tendency to write dark poems. But I love Haiku.?