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The Hermit Card

The card that I got was the Hermit
And I’ve got a secret to share
Although I am a true Virgo
The virgin part isn’t still there
For I have this thing against women
This “thing”s not a virtuous thought
This “thing” is alive and willing
And oh all the trouble it’s brought
I don’t want to go into seclusion
But maybe it’s best that I did
For I finally reached the conclusion
That my “thing” don’t like to be hid
So maybe it’s best you don’t ask me
For guidance in relationships
For my thoughts may be inner directed
But they’re focused pretty much on your hips


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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:49:00 PM

    Congrad's on your fine write winning high honors. Light & Love

    dailey Avatar mike dailey Date: 12/8/2012 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Debbie, it sure is fun to win but mostly because of the congratulations you get from fellow poets.
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 2:42:00 PM

    Mike :- ) Congratulations with your awesome poem in Tracie's "...Tarot Poem..." contest.. glad these are enjoyable winners.. take care~LINDA

    dailey Avatar mike dailey Date: 12/8/2012 6:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda, getting compliments from great poets is the best part of these contests. I'm glad you liked my effort in this contest.
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 12:00:00 PM

    Hi Mike, congrats Isn’t it fun to study up on some of these challenging contests like this.

    dailey Avatar mike dailey Date: 12/8/2012 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I had never looked at Tarot cards before so it was fun to see what the cards meant to believers. thanks for taking the time to comment as comments are the actual reward for winning poets.
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's contest Mike. Love Carol

    dailey Avatar mike dailey Date: 12/8/2012 6:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    first place or 10th place - it doesn't matter as long as someone reads the poems and lets the poet know they have fans.
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:42:00 AM

    Big congratulations Mike, still laughing here well done xx

    dailey Avatar mike dailey Date: 12/7/2012 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you liked it. Once I read what the card meant, I could not help but write it like I did.
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 12:49:00 AM

    This is funny, well done! Congrats and thanks for the laugh.

    dailey Avatar mike dailey Date: 12/7/2012 8:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard. I almost always go for the laugh - this world is too serious as it is. Mike
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 11:53:00 PM

    congrats mike on a dynamic write on the Hermit Tarot and a super win too luv .. how have u been???

    dailey Avatar mike dailey Date: 12/7/2012 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the comment. I have been off the soup for awhile - still writing every day but just not posting like I used to. I hope to get back to posting and entering contests again.
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:18:00 PM

    Lol. Well done Mike .....Seren

    dailey Avatar mike dailey Date: 12/7/2012 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you liked it - I couldn't help but laugh at what all the card stood for and I have trouble writing anything seerious so I had to go for the laugh.
    dailey Avatar mike dailey Date: 12/7/2012 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry