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Finished

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Finished

Mockingbird comes from his nest deep within running rose Where it rest upon the trellis Out into the down pour of rain stands shakes his wings over and over again Turns around goes back in through the thorns hungry but where it is dry and warm So like the Mockingbird am I I don't like facing a rainy day Just want to stay beside a roaring fire snug and warm....
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  1. Date: 8/4/2013 6:15:00 AM
    Sounds like a good trade to me, hunger for warmth and peace. In the Army I'll trade food for rest and sleep any day. You'll never not eat in the Army, but being snug and warm, getting any kind of sleep is a luxury we don't always get. I can identify with this one. I like... MC

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 10:37:00 AM
    beautifully expressed, my friend - I know exactly how you feel

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 6:08:00 AM
    visually expressive Sara .. a stunning portrait of imagery so grand luv .. a fabulous view thru your words ..

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 12:51:00 PM
    A free verse that formulates an imaginative awareness of your penned words Sara. Sending smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 12:29:00 PM
    Sara, I do not blame you for wanting the warmth of fire and sun... another wonderful poem... always...pd

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 11:13:00 AM
    It's amazing that you have imagined a mockingbird from that image! I don't think that I would have come up with that! Interesting how you went with the picture to this write, I truly love your imagination...you came come up with some really grand things, like I wish to be able to at times! What a fantastic and enlightening poem! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 9:57:00 AM
    and i too, Sara, this is lovely,enjoyed...

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 8:17:00 AM
    Did you see the mockingbird? or is this based entirely on that picture I just saw. it's a really good picture. I like how you compared your own feelings to those of the mockingbird.

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:29:00 AM
    Touching piece you penned here today Sara.. really enjoyed the insight to your words.. hugs Michael