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Bracelet of your hand

Wish, I was Bracelet of your hand
you with wish, love, urge & accede 
Wear me in your beautiful soft wrist
And Anxiousness with apartness in autumn moments 
In deep thoughts you spin me in your wrist
Aromatize with the aroma of your hand
In passion whenever you kiss me
Glee with incalescence of your lips
Night you your way to sleep 
Make pillow with your hand
I talk alot in your ear
Kiss your cheeks and hairs 
Keep me anxious spells of your eagerness
Aromatize in the garden of your soul
Kept clinking in patio of your body
If nothing but this unknown relation
Wish, I was Bracelet of your hand

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 3:40:00 AM

    MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR! Christmas Hugs from Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:56:00 AM

    Very romantico..Welcome to poetrysoup

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 2:36:00 PM

    very romantic! you keep writing..you have a special voice Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 11:59:00 AM

    Thank you for your kind comment on my work...welcome to Poetry Soup..looking forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry.

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Nice poem...you just need to work on your flow, and you have a misspelled word....Holly Moore

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 8:26:00 AM

    This is beautiful! I love the secrecy passion which uttered among these verses, simple wish but deep passion, this is so romantic, well done Ahsan :D

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:50:00 AM

    Ahh!!The discreet and sutility of the work is wonderful..Enjoyed reading your romantic words..I am glad that I chose this one today..I am going to copy this one out for it gives me an idea..If and when I might can write one..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 11/30/2012 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am going to fav it also..Sara
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:07:00 AM

    nice write Ahsan

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:41:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this poem by you, good use of imagination. Thanks for stopping by.

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:25:00 AM

    This is beautiful! Very creative too.

    Khalid Avatar Ahsan Khalid Date: 11/30/2012 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks you Rebecca
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:21:00 AM

    Enjoyed your poetry Muhammed. Your an interesting writer, love the assimilated thought you penned, bless you Rxxx

    Khalid Avatar Ahsan Khalid Date: 11/30/2012 6:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for appriciation
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:18:00 AM

    A very lovely poem Muhammad, you write well. - Have a relaxing weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Khalid Avatar Ahsan Khalid Date: 11/30/2012 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aww you are so nice Anne!
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:59:00 AM

    Love how you created this original piece... well done my friend... Michael

    Khalid Avatar Ahsan Khalid Date: 11/30/2012 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks michael to read through!