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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 3:40:00 AM
    MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR! Christmas Hugs from Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:56:00 AM
    Very romantico..Welcome to poetrysoup

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 2:36:00 PM
    very romantic! you keep have a special voice Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 11:35:00 AM
    Nice just need to work on your flow, and you have a misspelled word....Holly Moore

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 8:26:00 AM
    This is beautiful! I love the secrecy passion which uttered among these verses, simple wish but deep passion, this is so romantic, well done Ahsan :D

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:50:00 AM
    Ahh!!The discreet and sutility of the work is wonderful..Enjoyed reading your romantic words..I am glad that I chose this one today..I am going to copy this one out for it gives me an idea..If and when I might can write one..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

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    Date: 11/30/2012 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am going to fav it also..Sara
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:07:00 AM
    nice write Ahsan

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:41:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this poem by you, good use of imagination. Thanks for stopping by.

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:21:00 AM
    Enjoyed your poetry Muhammed. Your an interesting writer, love the assimilated thought you penned, bless you Rxxx

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:18:00 AM
    A very lovely poem Muhammad, you write well. - Have a relaxing weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:59:00 AM
    Love how you created this original piece... well done my friend... Michael