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gifts: the earth blooms

my love, 
the earth blooms
in warmth,
your soft touch 
sowed the seed . . .




2/3/2 3/3

19 Oct, 2012
(revised: 26 November, 2012)

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  1. Date: 12/28/2012 11:16:00 AM

    Very sentimental tanka Christie

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 2:56:00 PM

    This is such a superbly written tanka -- the theme is lovely. The first time I read this tanka, I was amazed how you were able to use only 13 syllables, and come-up with a perfectly complete poem.

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 2:51:00 AM

    ‡ JR Used To Always Say Unto Myself, 'Rachel, Its All About Love, Baby Girl!' Such A Beautiful Painting. 'Happy Holidays.' Love Always, Rachel *