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  1. Date: 4/1/2013 7:24:00 PM

    You, my HOMELESS sister, staying in the Budget Suites, and I take you in and give you hope. You try to take mine away. When a couple is having problems, especially when they are your sister and brother-in-law, spreading your legs and getting on your knees, offering a shoulder to the poor husband and plotting on your sister are NOT going to put you on a path toward happiness.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 7:24:00 PM

    Of course my husband didn't and doesn't love you. Of course he didn't call. Blackmailing him wouldn't make him call either. . If my husband falls, I pick him up. Trouble with you is you don't have boundaries or know your place. You did not love him, you only wanted our money. You are a wicked person to do what you have done and we will put our family back together despite the scar you have left on us. Why would you think your heart should be spared when you were messing with your sister's husband. Really, you are a nut. I hope the fairy making and dog walking is working out for you

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 6:53:00 PM

    You are the one who was causing pain. You are writing about my husband of nine years. YOU got hurt? Oh, poor poor baby. You will get no such pleasure. He knows where he is loved. I am the HER you write about and we are doing just fine. YOU Lori are not the one. If your heart was scarred it doesn't mean it is okay to hurt your own sister. You are a special kind of sick.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 6:14:00 PM

    So is this for Mark, Jim or my husband. The timing seems to be for my husband. Afterall, only a month before you wrote your brother-in-law numerous love letters.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 11:08:00 AM

    As someone who has also been burned, I hear ya sister! 4 years on I still feel it sometimes. I hope you have moved on.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 2:36:00 PM

    So much wishful thinking... better to just move on... to the future's happiness... Terry (emotive poem)

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:32:00 AM

    awesome write Lori..so sorry for this sadness.. wishing you all the best far off... much luv n hug <3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:56:00 PM

    Ohhhh...You write like you are going thru this at the moment? So sorry if you are.Don't play with the players,your always bound to get hurt.. :-( Your words flowed like they came from your heart.Very well written. :o)

    Bloom Avatar Nikki Bloom Date: 4/1/2013 7:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    She was going through it at that moment. it is hard for Lori to understand that it is not okay to mess with her own sister's husband. The desperate love letters and blackmail didn't work.