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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:57:00 AM

    Write on..! I say David; write on..!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:01:00 PM

    children..so sweet..but so wild :) ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 4:26:00 AM

    soup mail

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:46:00 AM

    Were you playing? hmm or were you getting it ready so you could play with the child? hmm Light & Love [write more..more]

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 9:44:00 AM

    you tell this ever so well David, one is taken there, with every word... i really like this....

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 10:24:00 PM

    Excellent poem! So vividly you have penned your words here David. Like it a lot. -- Sean

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:21:00 PM

    WOW David! I have no words. This is excellent! I love it :-)

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:56:00 PM

    A very supenseful write here.Those are the kinds I love.Great write! Right down to the 13-10-12? Haha :o)

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 2:05:00 PM

    Wonderful view you have written here my friend... hope your world is still round my friend... Michael

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 10:23:00 AM

    A familiar scene often, but the suspense was quite exciting, David!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 9:39:00 AM

    your description there David is awesome,its joyous readin' your poems.....there are just great penned

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:55:00 AM

    A certain entertaining write, very interesting to say the least! This poem is a little disturbing in some ways, not that this is a bad thing, just a little different! A very grandiose poem my friend, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! Fascinating, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:25:00 AM

    Nice bit of suspense there David. I never forget receiving a gift from my sister, one of those huge bottle gardens already planted. My boys broke it the same night, it cost us a fortune hunting round to find the exact same one to replace it the next day.. little darlings xx

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:17:00 AM

    An all too familiar scenario such nicely described in your poem. It kept me guessing till the end, well something like a sweet suspense. Nice to be reading your poems again.