Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:57:00 AM
    Write on..! I say David; write on..!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:01:00 PM sweet..but so wild :) ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 4:26:00 AM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:46:00 AM
    Were you playing? hmm or were you getting it ready so you could play with the child? hmm Light & Love [write more..more]

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 9:44:00 AM
    you tell this ever so well David, one is taken there, with every word... i really like this....

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 10:24:00 PM
    Excellent poem! So vividly you have penned your words here David. Like it a lot. -- Sean

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:21:00 PM
    WOW David! I have no words. This is excellent! I love it :-)

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:56:00 PM
    A very supenseful write here.Those are the kinds I love.Great write! Right down to the 13-10-12? Haha :o)

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 2:05:00 PM
    Wonderful view you have written here my friend... hope your world is still round my friend... Michael

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 10:23:00 AM
    A familiar scene often, but the suspense was quite exciting, David!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 9:39:00 AM
    your description there David is awesome,its joyous readin' your poems.....there are just great penned

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:55:00 AM
    A certain entertaining write, very interesting to say the least! This poem is a little disturbing in some ways, not that this is a bad thing, just a little different! A very grandiose poem my friend, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! Fascinating, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:25:00 AM
    Nice bit of suspense there David. I never forget receiving a gift from my sister, one of those huge bottle gardens already planted. My boys broke it the same night, it cost us a fortune hunting round to find the exact same one to replace it the next day.. little darlings xx

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:17:00 AM
    An all too familiar scenario such nicely described in your poem. It kept me guessing till the end, well something like a sweet suspense. Nice to be reading your poems again.