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  1. Date: 1/19/2014 2:03:00 PM

    Good...

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 4:19:00 PM

    Nicely Done

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 6:34:00 AM

    Vicky, very impassioned "in the moment" well done! jimbo

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:07:00 PM

    Vicky, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 5:56:00 PM

    sighs, so true too often.

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:58:00 PM

    It is the trend through out the world and each region has its own story....beautiful woven poem. This age is known to us as Kali Yuga..post this period none other is mentioned in our Scriptures

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 4:20:00 PM

    An interesting write here Vicky; I see You are exploring your experience's And putting out from them:) 'have enjoyed and wish you all the best.."

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 5:27:00 AM

    OMgosh! {{speechless... You did this and did it well. I love it!

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 1:56:00 PM

    You never cease to amaze me, another moving piece! Disturbing, vital and profound. I admire your gift and drink in your words with enourmous satisfaction.

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 12/2/2012 3:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard. The reality of the situation is very disturbing - and the cycle lives on.
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 12:41:00 PM

    A beautiful write Vicky. I really like it. Thanks for visiting my Tanka Demands of Love and for your heart warming comments. Best wishes. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:48:00 AM

    this is awesome vicky....,well narrated.i enjoyed reading...and truly its an awesome poem!

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:39:00 PM

    This is a great story. I read it twice. I really liked it. And, didn't you win something not too look ago? Congratulations! Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:06:00 PM

    Enjoyed this creative write, my dear Miss Vicky... well done! Love and hugs, Jack

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 12/2/2012 3:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jack!
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 1:49:00 PM

    Dynamic poetry! A tale of woe for all concerned... vividly described! Love it... Terry

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 11/29/2012 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Terry! I appreciate your comments.
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 1:47:00 PM

    Your a great story teller my dear Vicky. very much enjoyed... Michael

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 11/29/2012 5:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Michael!
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 1:32:00 PM

    An impressive write Vicky. It lets the reader imagine Mister Fisherman's and his world you have so masterly created for us. Is this for a contest? If it is, it reads like a win to me. Sending smiles, Connie

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 11/29/2012 5:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Connie!
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:44:00 AM

    wowser...so true I am sure men and their seed? rutting animals way too many of them..I saw Lincoln last night good movie..a bit like a documentory BUt all I could think was when the hell are we going to have equality under Universal Law for WOMEN??? Geeez it's 2012!! Light & Love [soup mail]

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 11/29/2012 7:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're right...and it is 2012. Equality seems more of an illusion than a reality.
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 3:05:00 AM

    A gripping story / poem, which was interesting to read Vicky. - :) - Well done !!! Wish you a nice day - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 11/29/2012 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne Lise!