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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 8:23:00 AM
    This a beautiful memory poem of a first job and first love. One that you never forget. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 9:11:00 PM
    I love this John, i do not like telling folks i grew up on a farm...however this is a good little love story. ... PS.... i love your new avatar... save a horse ride a tractor lol... love the John Deere life.. your avatar goes with my " Around the corner ....... Are you In or Out " BLOG... always ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 5:43:00 PM
    Alas, I have a sneaky feeling it ended badly, too bad as I do love happy endings! Such a great tale to enjoy, hope to read part 2.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 10:45:00 AM
    An echo of a lost love... Beautifully written.

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 11:36:00 PM
    Bittersweet 'coming of age' poem..well done..lived that life, so could picture the waiting game she played....

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 3:41:00 PM
    Awww...Those summer loves.It reminded me of that Grease song..Summer Lovin...Ha ha. Nice one!