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Dude Ranch Summer - First Job, First Love

She mopped the floor of cabin four, and thought of the boy from the night before with the fancy pants at the evening dance. Was she his girl? Was there a chance? She’d played coy, a china toy he’d been brash, a tin cowboy. He lived up river, made her shiver, as cupid snared with bow and quiver. When he came to call she gave her all, unlocked the door let down her wall. In his depart he took her heart innocence pierced by fiery dart. A mournful cleft, she felt when left. She was torn and quite bereft. Through summer’s end, she did pretend, that her vaunted love would come again.

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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 8:23:00 AM

    This a beautiful memory poem of a first job and first love. One that you never forget. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 9:11:00 PM

    I love this John, i do not like telling folks i grew up on a farm...however this is a good little love story. ... PS.... i love your new avatar... save a horse ride a tractor lol... love the John Deere life.. your avatar goes with my " Around the corner ....... Are you In or Out " BLOG... always ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 5:43:00 PM

    Alas, I have a sneaky feeling it ended badly, too bad as I do love happy endings! Such a great tale to enjoy, hope to read part 2.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 10:45:00 AM

    An echo of a lost love... Beautifully written.

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 11:36:00 PM

    Bittersweet 'coming of age' poem..well done..lived that life, so could picture the waiting game she played....

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 3:41:00 PM

    Awww...Those summer loves.It reminded me of that Grease song..Summer Lovin...Ha ha. Nice one!