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Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 12/13/2012 12:05:00 AM
Hey Frank, this is a great write! It's bad enough to have a bad dream, but to have it recurring is torture. At least the ending gives comfort. Congrats on your win!
Leonora Galinta
Date: 12/12/2012 8:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear libramate, Frank! Thank you so much for your full support! love and hugs, Leonora
binibining P.iNk
Date: 12/1/2012 8:22:00 AM
This is haunting in a way, Frank -- and I like how you wrote this in this kind of surreal way-- almost made me feel as I watching that dream-- but yes, how you ended this was very nice, I like that assurance in the end with seeing the "First Light"-- sending you email in a bit...
Carl Fraser
Date: 11/30/2012 9:23:00 PM
Hi Frank, wonderful wording in your poem, like your style, and love the ending, blessings, Carl
Mystic Rose
Date: 11/29/2012 3:13:00 PM
Excellent write Frank, I haven't been on soup as much lately, working long hours at work, not enough time to write poetry as I would like, haven't forgotten you, thanks for stopping by, xxx vie
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 11/29/2012 2:53:00 PM
Written with passion and a heart of gold my fiend... you stand tall in this piece. Michael
Becca Lucas
Date: 11/29/2012 1:59:00 PM
soup mail :)
Becca Lucas
Date: 11/29/2012 11:19:00 AM
I love the way you wrote this, Frank, it is very touching. ~Becca
Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 11/29/2012 12:11:00 AM
Frank...we have all known those nights--seems writing is the best way to survive them--and you have done it elegantly! i especially like: "And as the dark of night descended... and dreadful dreams of him and her upended." Great job!