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world war

Guns are firing
bombs in the air
people are dying
it's just not fair.

Tanks and armored weapons
injuries so severe
we will never truly know what happened 
during these awful years.

Now the war is over
crosses all around
the fields are calm and peaceful
poppies lay on the ground.

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  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:35:00 AM

    Sadly there neve seems to be an end to war? Welcome to Poetry Soup, if you need any help or information it would be my pleasure to aid you. I am running a Contest now for 6 lines of verse on the topic light..please do enter. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 8:32:00 PM

    Hello Jon, the 8 year old.. nice to meet you and your poetry. I hope you like it here on the soup. ABOUT YOUR POEM: I agree with you about not knowing the true images that happened during the world wars. However, i love the ending resting place image you give your poem.. welcome to the soup... Please post more poems, I want to read them.. take care ;-) LINDA

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:39:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Jon. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 9:23:00 PM

    Very nice poem Jon, keep up the poems, hugs vie

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 7:35:00 PM

    btw im 8 years old