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My Mountain

Oh,when I look at you great one
I get shivers down my spine,
Your represent such a hold on life
How I ache to begin that climb.
Each step is for a year of life
Getting stronger every day,
Pushing throught the obstacles
Not allowing anything in the way.
Getting closer to the top
What a great and wonderous feat,
Feeling young and so alive
A joyous feeling that can't be beat.
All these thoughts are flowing
As I look at you great one,
Going to prepare for my journey now
Climbing you will be such fun.

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:12:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Sandy Ivy's "Viewing Life" contest Christine. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 3:02:00 AM

    Enjoy every step of the way and don't forget... the view halfway can be surprising fabulous to - in a way you might consider to take a break from climbing and actually see the glory of being half way already! can't wait for you to tell how your climb is or was :-) I'd like to now for sure!! Words visualizing a road I can relate to Felicitations. :+) Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:39:00 PM

    Congrats Christine.....Seren

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:13:00 PM

    C. :-) CONGRATULATIONS ON A POEM WELL DONE..... ALWAYS & FOREVER~ linda

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 4:29:00 PM

    Congrats :-) Sandy

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 11:09:00 PM

    wonderful write Christine,I have a tree planted on top of the mountain,when you get there check it out it's called the Tree of Life,LOL

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 8:37:00 PM

    Nothing like mountain air and the summit, enjoyed your poetry Christine, Vie

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 7:01:00 PM

    Christine very nice poem. Connie

    Ghauri Avatar Christine Ghauri Date: 11/28/2012 7:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Connie. Christine