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Come Along

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Come Along

Just come along
With me on this road 
not so long
A road that is very 
short
To learn a little about 
my world of all sort!

Come along and read
The things that are 
here for us to lead
Ourselves and others 
to the promised land
Which makes us look 
like magicians with the 
best wand!

Come along and correct 
me
Where you notice flaws 
that be
Then do not fail to 
commend
The ones that are 
straight and not bend!

OH God my Creator
The Lord of the world 
and Saviour
Make these lines 
beneficial
And not make me a lamb 
sacrificial!

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:26:00 AM
    Good.very good.. " I liked the end line : not make me a lamb sacrificial!" This line gives power to whole poem. thanks to share

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:34:00 PM
    Adesina Idris Dolapo ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 9:11:00 AM
    Adesina nice plea...David