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A Shadow Of A Doubt

     If you looked deeper to how one actually feels inside
     I'll tell you the grass is never greener on the other side
     Yet again you know still I'm trying to figger myself out
     Yeah stuck I am again behind this shadow of a doubt
      
     Just take a closer look, so much more your discover
     Why is it people have to judge a book by one's cover
     Now I feel like a shadow of the person that I used to be 
     The same old sinareo, on a mission of self discovery

    Sometimes  a persons character can be complexed
    Dose it matter if your one who's not always in context
    On reflection I'm left in doubt, to where is it I now begin
    Another introspection, again it's the outside looking in

    If I can communicate on any level, if I was that articulate
    But if in a state my approach sceptical, and not as acute  
    Should I be more outspoken, should I scream and shout
    Could one be any more open, can I be anymore heartfelt?

  An obstacle to tackle, a loss of pride, masked by the provado
  A case of doctor jackal and Mr. hide, I lurk behind a shadow
  Even now I'm looking for acceptance, some kind of approval
  It's like living this prison sentence that always seems dismal

   Again here I am at zero one can't help but feel like utter shite
   Inside this giant inferno waiting to erupt, a test of one's might
   Funny I was born on the day of woe how did that come about
   And here I am yet again stuck behind this shadow of a doubt
   
  
     THIS WAS KIND OF THOWN TOGEATHER BITS WERE FROM A POEM
i SCAPED CALLED INTROSPECTION THIS IS ALSO CONTINUING ON FROM
TROUBLED SOUL WHERE DO I GO FROM HERE A SHADOW OF A DOUBT
             WRITTEN NO1 2012   OR THOUGH IDEA WAY BACK IN 2001 
              AND ORALLY A TITLE IDEA FOR ROMANTIC POEM

                                                            
                                
                                                              

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 12:39:00 AM

    I love this David! The thoughts expressed show well the conflict of human beings - we want to achieve greatness but we are always held back by our own fears. Nicely done!