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  1. Date: 6/27/2013 8:54:00 AM
    WOW is all I have to say this was a really good write, much enjoyed this short tale, ~always, Linda

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 6:39:00 PM
    Really scary David. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 2:05:00 PM
    UT oh the cursed picture got her! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 11:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Waking Up" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot once again David xx

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:00:00 AM
    Very well penned David! ....spooky, and the waking up part is scary. It's like being suspended in a never ending nightmare. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win my dear David! Thank you so much for your full support! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:45:00 AM
    Very nice tale you have spun David, like something i think i saw once on twilight zone, blessings Carl

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 5:58:00 AM
    another wonderful poem from you David, one is taken there, to live within the poem, it is so intense...

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 10:43:00 PM
    This is very intense. I like this kind of poetry. Great piece. -- Sean

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 2:39:00 PM
    Wow! really enjoyed this David. It reminded me of a story or movie-something from the murky depths of my mind-where someone was swallowed up into a picture. Was definately holding my breath while I read! And thanks for stopping by. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 1:46:00 PM
    Powerful entry---thank goodness it was just a dream! U are great at these sort of writes, matey!! Suspenseful indeed! :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 4:20:00 AM
    I felt the suspense as I was reading your poem! The ending puzzles me. Clever write! Thanks David for visiting my corner. Dalila

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 6:47:00 PM
    this is very creepy but so well-written and suspenseful that you had me itching to see how it would end. thanks for the treat!

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 4:38:00 PM
    That is so cool. I now see what a true dramatic verse is. Really, really good. I loved it! I soup'd you 2x. I'm trying to write a Ghazal. Thanks for your comments...xxoo Holly

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 2:49:00 PM
    Very creative piece David , kind of creep me out a little bit though(lol) - Dio

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 2:37:00 PM
    Scarey write, loved it. Completly drew me in from beggining to end. Perfect ending!

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 12:07:00 PM
    Very nice, David... I'm left with a weird sensation... I have a picture of a single eye... I'm going to place it facing the garden window - forest view... just in case I should someday also be transmuted... The eye and I will have something to think about... Terry (great poem)

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 11:52:00 AM
    I had an inkling at where you were taking me through this poem! The ending was incredible but I might have been there before you described it...sorry, just my imagination running wild too! We must have thought along the same lines with this write! I love where you went with it, very awesome poem my friend! What a powerful piece this one is!

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 10:44:00 AM
    Your ending surprised me as well until the last seven line then it read like a twilight zone episode. Very entertaining. Thank you for sharing.