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Reflections Of Life

What makes us act the way we do
Is it something buried deep in our genes?
Programmed to live our whole life through
Never able to alter the scene?

Are we all merely here to play a role
That's been predetermined by fate?
Can we redirect the path we're following
If we're heading for a life second rate?

Don't get me wrong, my life's been great
There's nothing I'd really like to change
Perhaps a little more stability would be nice
Though I might find that a wee bit strange

Everybody thinks it would be better “if”
But “if” has certain strings attached
Shouldn't go there, the results could be bad
Don't mess with the path that's been mapped

Just be happy with the skin that you're in
Your life will take its own twists and turns
If you just try to live an exemplary life
Loads of happiness will be yours in return

© Jack Ellison 2012

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  1. Date: 11/28/2012 1:19:00 PM

    Lesson learned... Very nice Jack :o)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/29/2012 5:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you my friend... have a great day! Cheers, Jack
  1. Date: 11/28/2012 11:14:00 AM

    Hi Jack I like these wise words, if is a small word with large consequnces, I would not change anything I have done, if I do so i am no longer me, all the best Owen

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/29/2012 5:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Greeting from across the pond! "if I do so i am no longer me". So very true"... well said! Thanks Owen!
  1. Date: 11/28/2012 10:51:00 AM

    I wrote a poem on the same theme as yours that I never posted. It's title is "Sheer Envy" I so enjoyed the theme of this poem of yours. And enjoyed reading it. Great work Jack.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/29/2012 5:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Waiting for "Sheer Envy"... I'll be on the lookout! Thanks once again for the good words Jon!
  1. Date: 11/28/2012 10:44:00 AM

    You can change it if you want to... but mostly, who wants to? The grass is always greener in some one else's yard... but see what happens... that's what landed me in the desert, of course. No grass, but darn pretty rocks!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/29/2012 5:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The neighbours grass has weeds in it too! "pretty rocks"... LOL Hugs and mucho love, Jack xox
  1. Date: 11/28/2012 8:47:00 AM

    You are a wise old soul you know xx

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/28/2012 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dear friend... love and big hugs, Jack xox
  1. Date: 11/28/2012 8:45:00 AM

    For a guy who is not religious you seem to have a lot of God directed questions. I hope you discover all the answers you are seeking. This is a very good reflective poem, somewhat more serious than usual.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/28/2012 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nature and the love of life is and has always been my religion! Thanks my friend, hope your day is filled with joy and laughter!
  1. Date: 11/28/2012 4:28:00 AM

    Good penned, Jack. Something to think about. Hmm. That would occupy my morning :)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 11/28/2012 4:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are ALWAYS so kind dear friend! Don't stress over it Toquyen, just go with the flow! Love Jack xox