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ARCTIC FIRE BUGS

The Arctic Fire Bugs

Ice nights are the playpen
For the kids born to this land
 Skating rinks and bowling shoes 
Never touched a hand
Or foot that kicked at blocks of ice
As thick as you are tall
They scoff at jackets toss their hats
While through the drifts they crawl
Gather wood and getting high by tearing limbs from trees
Boozing up to get a buzz in temperatures that freeze
Building up a bonfire that will signal all their friends
Friday night is party night till sirens scream the end
Now it comes the fun part when they run from chasing cops
Scatter all directions and ignoring calls for “stop”--
Game they play that irritates and costs the city bucks--
What else is there to do unless they steal the fire trucks? 




Note:  In Alaska outback, bonfire is the key meeting place for teens--this poem is based on my teen son and his mode of fun in Valdez, Alaska--350+ miles from the next city--a town at the end of a long road (the Richardson Highway) with only one town tat the edge of the Bering Sea (often called North Sea).

Fire and Ice Contest
November 27, 2012
Victoria Anderson-Throop

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  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:45:00 AM

    Congratulations on your awesome win my dear Victoria! love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Victoria love xx

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:43:00 AM

    An awesome write!! Congrats my friend Victoria on your winning poem. Cheers and Good day always!! Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 1:07:00 AM

    I hate bugs...... Why do I like your - also cold - BUGS so much????????? The poetical FIRE of your poem offers warmth. Congratulations with this win! :-) Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 8:42:00 PM

    Victoria, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 4:58:00 PM

    wow, this is interesting to know. I like how you made this topic your own by using events of your real life in Alaska. Do you miss it, dear? please answer my soupmail. I am worried about you. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 1:51:00 PM

    Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Victoria. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 12:25:00 PM

    Not too different in the states--bonfires and teens. lol. Best of luck in the contest. Enjoyed this delightful rhyme. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:33:00 PM

    This made me smile, teens will be teens we've all been there, thanks for sharing Victoria, this is priceless, vie