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Me without You

Me without you is a motionless sail boat,
A kid being out doors in the winter without a coat.
A basketball star without ever having any coach.
Can you picture trying to fly a plane with no engine?
A mother of three trying to feed her children with no kitchen?
Do you notice some of the things that are missing?
Baby you are a puzzle, with a piece missing. 
Without the E in ME, is everything! 
Nothing is complete if there is no YOU AND ME.
That is like trying to serve a turkey with no wings on Thanksgivings.
I am the key you turn in your ignition, I kindle your love intentions.
Oh, what sweet reminiscing, like a pastry treats with frosting.
I bet that put a smile on your face, like a kid winning his first race.
 As I were your Hostess Twinkie and you were my creamed that filled me.
You are the only one that completes me, that how our love flow so swiftly.
As a little girl twirling around in her favorite dress, I think I will keep you because you fit me best.
There is no such thing as a Me without you, because simply no one could ever compare to you.
That is like a sneaker with no lace, you are surly to fall on your face.
But don’t worry I will be right there to catch you with grace.

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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 2:25:00 PM

    Twanna , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha Date: 1/1/2013 2:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aww thank you for taking time out of your day and think of me. I truly feel honored...may you have da best year ever :)
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:49:00 PM

    ‡ Your Beauty's Painting Stirs Deeply The Hearths Embers Reflecting Love's Warm Fire, Sweet Beautiful Twanna! True Love, Carved In Stone Written In The Celestails Skies, Could Not Have Proclaimed Nor Declared This Love In The Slightest Way Better. 'There Is No Me Without You.' Tis Sooo Very Beautiful! 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *