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Me without You

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Me without You

Me without you is a motionless sail boat,
A kid being out doors in the winter without a coat.
A basketball star without ever having any coach.
Can you picture trying to fly a plane with no engine?
A mother of three trying to feed her children with no kitchen?
Do you notice some of the things that are missing?
Baby you are a puzzle, with a piece missing. 
Without the E in ME, is everything! 
Nothing is complete if there is no YOU AND ME.
That is like trying to serve a turkey with no wings on Thanksgivings.
I am the key you turn in your ignition, I kindle your love intentions.
Oh, what sweet reminiscing, like a pastry treats with frosting.
I bet that put a smile on your face, like a kid winning his first race.
 As I were your Hostess Twinkie and you were my creamed that filled me.
You are the only one that completes me, that how our love flow so swiftly.
As a little girl twirling around in her favorite dress, I think I will keep you because you fit me best.
There is no such thing as a Me without you, because simply no one could ever compare to you.
That is like a sneaker with no lace, you are surly to fall on your face.
But don’t worry I will be right there to catch you with grace.

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  1. Date: 6/10/2013 11:24:00 AM
    An awesome piece..love the flow in all of your work!!

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 6/10/2013 12:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    aww thank you Pace. :)
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 2:25:00 PM
    Twanna , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 1/1/2013 2:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aww thank you for taking time out of your day and think of me. I truly feel honored...may you have da best year ever :)