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Sooty Soot

Stranded on a sooty soot in mood
Pile of dusts sight forsaken by the time
In the maze of mangle, I glued
Grief  tranquillize, honored as it should

Still sense writhing in polemic
Steal the realities which still running
As was treading in the faint of hallucinations
Whisper the bitter rift onto the dripping cracks in solutions

Upon the night which had stolen
Startled by the slap of innocent accusation
Exclaimed the lifeless facts with no respect
Her tendency of imperfect slipped to reflect

Their perfect life was just too flawless
While I struggled in the world of hug-less
At that time I stood upon my shadow
While people chased sun from shadow to shadow

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  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:46:00 PM

    Hi Yanny, I like your new photo, you look happy in the picture. Also enjoyed your poem. Have a wonderful day.

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 2:50:00 PM

    ‡ I Really The Voice I Find In This Beautiful Painting, Sweet Beautiful Yanny. Many Possibilities Of Course For The Reader To Choose From Amid This At Least In Regards Unto Myself, Abstract Canvas ? In One Of My Minds Own Visions I Find A Goddess Gazing Upon Humanity Chasing These Shifting Sands Decade To Decade Century Atop Of Century ? Never The Nearer Perhaps Yet Always Chasing Something Or Another ? Wherein Death Seems To Be Ever The Common. Beauty Is Beauty As You Are! 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 2:00:00 PM

    hey, I like your shadow to shadow line, while people chased sun from shadow to shadow . that is so cool in this poem!!