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Shattered Glass

A glass sphere cracks in places Begins to explode It shakes and rattles about Fixed in my abode It shatters apart It breaks into small pieces Like a lonely heart
Russell Sivey Form Seguidilla

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 2:02:00 PM

    Hi Russell,...oh so true...nice comparison that many can relate to...Yes, I have had some intense writer's block lately as other stresses have preoccupied the same area of my brain as the creativity center...I hope it ceases soon. Thanks for reading...u are one of the most supportive members of this site..I do appreciate it! Cute Avatar of your puppy...what was her name???

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 3:00:00 PM

    awww, like a lonely heart. SAd but good one.

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:39:00 PM

    slow motion explosion glass erosion well done here Russell mate...

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 6:10:00 PM

    Ahh yes...I know that sound well !! Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 5:01:00 PM

    Great comparison of the two..Enjoyed reading this one..I hope that is not your life at all just a work about the topic of a lonely heart...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 2:17:00 PM

    love this clever write, Russell

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 11:54:00 AM

    Love this poem Russell, a gem for sure. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 11:43:00 AM

    love the form, but I especially love this write of yours. Your ending is sublime :) hope your week is a good one! Love Wilma

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 11:22:00 AM

    Russell great metaphor and very sad...I like it a lot...David