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Suicide


an evil damns the stream 
a stagnancy so deadly,
life cannot not run
its natural course.


©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins
November 18, 2012

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  1. Date: 1/6/2013 5:49:00 PM

    A very succinct and well penned synopsis of suicide. Bravo!

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:11:00 PM

    Exceptional! The best short commentary on suicide I have ever read. Love, Keith

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:46:00 AM

    My sentiments exactly..Holly

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:01:00 PM

    Hi Kathy - So sad when people think that there is no other way...appreciate your strong words and image. - Gail

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:48:00 AM

    When chi can't flow nothing grows aye?Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 9:51:00 AM

    Very well done. I am sure I saw this one before. Nice to see you posting here. I just happened to see you commenting somewhere and clicked on your name. And presto, I can see your latest posts!

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 10:22:00 AM

    Dear Kathy... wonderful play on words and use of metaphors... I hope that is all that it is and not an expression of something else... You know, Kathy, you have (I suppose) 2 Irish surnames... and you've certainly heard about 'smiling Irish eyes'... I hope... Love Terry

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:53:00 AM

    kathy, great metaphors, only hope it doesn't last...well done..David

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:39:00 AM

    Hi Kathryn, here's wishing you hope that you will find the beavers busy at work behind the scene, you told suicide true, but please some hope.