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SHE DREAMS

SHE DREAMS
She creams after bathing
                            …In hymns she’s singing… 
                                                                        She beams she’s sleeping…
It seems she’s dreaming…
                            …She dreams she’s running
                                  It dims it’s darkening
                                Eerie themes now rising 
                                  The imps are chasing
                                 No teams she’s crying
                                 The nymphs are coming!           
                                  The nymphs are going!
                                  To streams for bathing
                                   The imps still chasing
                                  Her whims were failing
                                No schemes for escaping
                                    The imps besieging 
                           “Imps! Imps!!” She’s screaming
                               It steams she’s sweating…
It seems she’s waking …
                               She screams she’s panting
                                                                          "Oh, Imps; I’m dreaming!”
                                …In hymns she’s humming… 
                                                                            She beams she’s dozing…

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  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:56:00 AM

    Angel I love the format of your poem, very creative, well done...David

    Simon Avatar Angel Simon Date: 11/27/2012 9:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David... Love
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:52:00 AM

    Awesome write much enjoyed!!

    Simon Avatar Angel Simon Date: 11/27/2012 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Edward... Love
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:44:00 AM

    Hi Angel, love the energy in this fantasy poem, it makes me think of the Ring Trilogy, all the nymphs. Good use of repetition and form.

    Simon Avatar Angel Simon Date: 11/27/2012 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sheri...Love