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Smoldering look

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Below is the poem entitled Smoldering look which was written by poet Seren Roberts. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Smoldering look

V enus arrives on shore graciously in a shell
E asily carried by breadth the sun gods expel
N ymphs greet her with a rich purple cloak
U ndulating roses their seed heads shook
S he covers her modesty with a smoldering look

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  1. Date: 11/28/2012 7:59:00 PM

    Your acrostic blazes with sensuality....well done! Hugs

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/29/2012 12:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cecila for stopping and commenting.....Seren
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:53:00 PM

    that was really an interesting line from which you derived the title of your fine acrostic poem: She covers her modesty with a smoldering look. Love that!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/27/2012 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol dont know where it came from .......thanks for stopping by....Seren
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 6:54:00 AM

    Who's a clever girl then, I laugh at subtle, but clever yes. This is lovely xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/27/2012 2:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    me isnt.... Thought I would have a go at this form. Wasnt sure if it was ok.. Seren
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:11:00 AM

    Seren excellent acrostic very subltly romantic...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/27/2012 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    wow David me being subtle thats new on my poem scene......... Thanks for stopping by ........Seren