What is this feeling by Jacob Cramer

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/9/2012 11:11:00 AM

[my stomach/ flutters while my hands sweat -- first date] Thanks for the info and the invite I did take you up on it ;) maybe this is for the questionku? Light & Love

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT

Date: 12/8/2012 8:35:00 PM

Now this is good...caught me off guard with this one. Thank you for your kind visit and comment..I will definitely visit that site. Again your Haiku is way too cool.

Richard Palmer

Date: 12/8/2012 6:08:00 PM

lol made you shiver a little, that chilly feeling that run down your spine lol,great write Jacob

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2012 2:01:00 PM

Good expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..I will check out your site..I have had one poem published in a magazine awhile back and I have two or three poems coming out in a book called "Snippets"..Sara

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 12/8/2012 1:31:00 PM

Feeling the love ...... a lovely feeling Jacob. - A very good haiku! I wish you a good and relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/8/2012 1:20:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Yes I am already published and both my books are available in the Soup Store.

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 12/2/2012 4:21:00 AM

I have come to realize that my replies may not have been getting through to you so I am attempting a different route . Dear Jacob : Once again I must thank you for your vision and praise and tell you that I read a little flatulent, airy humour. Bill. ?? nihao / Halo Jacob : Look young man, I am simply astounded by you interest, flabbergasted by your belief in the state and quality of my stuff, It just simply knocks me out to see that one can find so much more in what I have attempted then I could ever fathom possible, for which ( during the few years upon this plain left to me ) I will forever be grateful. Thank you so very much Jacob. Jacob, I am at your mercy, putty in your hands, for at this stage in my involvement with this site - I know nothing - and so, what ever you think would mold your belief in me into a

Jacob Cramer Date: 12/8/2012 1:06:00 PM

Thank you so much for all of your kind words. And do not be doubtful, you really are a phenomenal poet. You should really enter one of your poems on my site, poeticpossibilities.tk . If you do, I could really help you become published! (in an anthology, of course). Really!!! I'm published in 5 books!

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 12/2/2012 4:20:00 AM

visible sculpture and best serve your faith, please do what ever you deem necessary in order to reach your goal and know that you have my permission and my blessing, for you just may take my nothing and create something, take it far beyond my intensions, which what you see is as far as I was prepared to go. This was enough for me my Boy.

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 12/2/2012 4:20:00 AM

I have come to realize that my replies may not have been getting through to you so I am attempting a different route . Dear Jacob : Once again I must thank you for your vision and praise and tell you that I read a little flatulent, airy humour. Bill. ?? nihao / Halo Jacob : Look young man, I am simply astounded by you interest, flabbergasted by your belief in the state and quality of my stuff, It just simply knocks me out to see that one can find so much more in what I have attempted then I could ever fathom possible, for which ( during the few years upon this plain left to me ) I will forever be grateful. Thank you so very much Jacob. Jacob, I am at your mercy, putty in your hands, for at this stage in my involvement with this site - I know nothing - and so, what ever you think would mold your belief in me into a

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 12/2/2012 4:19:00 AM

Do widzenia / ??zàijiàn. Bill. Jacob: I truly appreciate all your glowing praise. I wish I could see what you see. “ Is it published or what? ” I have say no Jacob, and I suspect, not likely, any time in the near future, for I am a novice at this and upon reading poetry from the minds of others, would never consider my stuff worthy.

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 12/2/2012 4:18:00 AM

It is refreshing to see comments like “ Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read ” and “ It's really good, and you are extremely talented... ” along with “ think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! ” if nothing else, it takes my efforts and put them in a positive light.

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 12/2/2012 4:17:00 AM

Time will tell though, as to how for I will go, for if only a few of the members feel as you, then I have done all I will do and be satisfied with my efforts. Yes Jacob, I will view your site, as I will others, as I become more familiar and proficient with the workings of this site. I too wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! :) B ill. ( B. J. “A” 2

janet muthoni

Date: 11/30/2012 11:13:00 AM

lovely jacob......!janet.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/29/2012 9:12:00 PM

Jacob,,,, ha love it ... love is good ..always~ PD

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/27/2012 3:43:00 PM

This is so much fun!

David Williams

Date: 11/27/2012 12:20:00 PM

soup mail...

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/26/2012 6:10:00 PM

Lol! really a genuine feelings of you, you are really talented, but, are you really twelve? XD

David Williams

Date: 11/26/2012 3:25:00 PM

Jacob are you really only twelve years young, you are talented, but if I could ask you to check line two for a typo, but apart from that you brought a smile to my face, very well done...keep writing..David

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