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START

I am at the start again where it all began.

I have been pushed way back to the point where it seems like putting my foot on the gas is a waste of time.

The light has turned green but my mind is still on red.

It Already has stopped moving on only to get back to the where I am.



I can get off the brake but then I am scared I don't know where I will go.

I have lost my control to steer.

For depression is now control of the wheel and wont let go.

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  1. Date: 11/26/2012 8:19:00 AM
    Christina very good use of metaphors, it flows nicely, well done...David

    Wiliams Avatar Christina Wiliams
    Date: 11/26/2012 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I reallly appreciate it. Have a great day! :)
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 6:28:00 AM
    I love the way you took an emotion and compared it to driving a car, remember my dear as long as you have a full tank, and hope is in your carburetor you are the only person who can take off the breaks, stay in your stillness and know that you are loved, and cherished by your father who knows, that you are worth more than words can say, big hugs, and a smile you seem to need one, xxx vie

    Wiliams Avatar Christina Wiliams
    Date: 11/26/2012 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for taking the time to read this and for commenting. I appreciate it more than you know. Have a great day Vienna! :)