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Tanka - 1

sudden fall rain titillates the kids at play I see innocence how it depicts a time when I called you my brother

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:04:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Sean. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 6:39:00 PM

    Sean.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 5:30:00 PM

    a well deserved win, I must say. Big congrats to you!

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:30:00 AM

    Big congratulations on your winning place Sean xx

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:21:00 PM

    memory such a mysterious thing..some good, some bad..they come and go as they please..thank you for this charming write. PLease do write for my new 6 line contest on LIGHT Congrad's on your skillfull win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:26:00 PM

    Congratulations on your very well written poem in Debbie Guzzi contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 10:44:00 AM

    Wow Sean, your ending is so unexpected! Enjoyed your Tanka tonight! Thank you for taking a peek on my side ;)

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 8:21:00 PM

    Sean, very harsh ending,,, good tanka,,, LINDA

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 3:06:00 PM

    wow, this tanka is very nicely done!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 1:07:00 PM

    Sean welcome and keep writing, this is great...David

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:49:00 AM

    Very nice my friend...Michael

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:05:00 AM

    Thank you for reading.