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Sara's Second Haiku

fresh bird seed placed in
the bird feeders..
red cardinals fight

cardinals eat their 
fill, fly down to the bird bath...
frozen water question 


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  1. Simon Avatar
    Angel Simon
    Date: 11/27/2012 9:27:00 AM
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    Good one Sara! You indulged the nature part of Me. Angel
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    elizabeth wesley
    Date: 11/26/2012 4:57:00 AM
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    Well, I would think you are pretty seasoned writing these things. Both are quite wonderful to read.
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 11/25/2012 10:07:00 PM
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    This write is truly a phenomenal write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and terrific poem this evening! I've fallen behind in my comments to everybody! I've had a lot of schoolwork and family time that I've had to deal with! This is a fabulous and fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 11/25/2012 9:49:00 PM
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    Sara, my favorite bird will be the Cardinal.. I've only seen a few my entire life,,, every time i see one I get excited like a little kid.... love the haiku...pd
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    Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/25/2012 4:22:00 PM
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    Amazing Haikus Sara - aesthetically carved. Thanks for admiring the meaning of my Haiku. I am glad I have been able to convey my thoughts in a seventeen syllable poem. Have a nice day. -Mohammad
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 11/25/2012 11:29:00 AM
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    Wonderful haikus Sara,the image is so visual! Have peaceful Sunday..Hugs~Arild
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    harry horsman
    Date: 11/25/2012 10:02:00 AM
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    love this Sara, wonderful Haikus.
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/25/2012 8:52:00 AM
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    Such beauty in your work... lovely... hugs Michael
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    Erich Goller
    Date: 11/25/2012 8:42:00 AM
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    that's a lovely expressed Haiku, thanks for sharing i, God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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    bl devnath
    Date: 11/25/2012 8:17:00 AM
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    Beautiful image captured with nice words. Loved always, bl
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    jack horne
    Date: 11/25/2012 6:56:00 AM
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    I could visualise this one perfectly too, Sara - lovely picture you have painted here
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 11/25/2012 6:24:00 AM
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    This is another beautiful haiku which I enjoy reading tonight my dear friend Sara. Thank you for sharing! love always, Leonora
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    Anne Rutherford
    Date: 11/25/2012 6:08:00 AM
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    Here the birds have to get the seed before the squirrels . well done Haiku Sara. Anne
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    Constance La France
    Date: 11/25/2012 5:38:00 AM
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    Sara, your poem is so visual and lovely, I can see those beautiful cardinals, yes frozen water could be a problem. Constance


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