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Sara's Second Haiku

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I went out and poured some warm water into the bath..They came back and drank..

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Sara's Second Haiku

fresh bird seed placed in the bird feeders.. red cardinals fight cardinals eat their fill, fly down to the bird bath... frozen water question
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  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:27:00 AM
    Good one Sara! You indulged the nature part of Me. Angel

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:57:00 AM
    Well, I would think you are pretty seasoned writing these things. Both are quite wonderful to read.

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 10:07:00 PM
    This write is truly a phenomenal write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and terrific poem this evening! I've fallen behind in my comments to everybody! I've had a lot of schoolwork and family time that I've had to deal with! This is a fabulous and fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:49:00 PM
    Sara, my favorite bird will be the Cardinal.. I've only seen a few my entire life,,, every time i see one I get excited like a little kid.... love the haiku...pd

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 4:22:00 PM
    Amazing Haikus Sara - aesthetically carved. Thanks for admiring the meaning of my Haiku. I am glad I have been able to convey my thoughts in a seventeen syllable poem. Have a nice day. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 11:29:00 AM
    Wonderful haikus Sara,the image is so visual! Have peaceful Sunday..Hugs~Arild

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 10:02:00 AM
    love this Sara, wonderful Haikus.

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:52:00 AM
    Such beauty in your work... lovely... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:42:00 AM
    that's a lovely expressed Haiku, thanks for sharing i, God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:17:00 AM
    Beautiful image captured with nice words. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 6:56:00 AM
    I could visualise this one perfectly too, Sara - lovely picture you have painted here

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 6:24:00 AM
    This is another beautiful haiku which I enjoy reading tonight my dear friend Sara. Thank you for sharing! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 6:08:00 AM
    Here the birds have to get the seed before the squirrels . well done Haiku Sara. Anne

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 5:38:00 AM
    Sara, your poem is so visual and lovely, I can see those beautiful cardinals, yes frozen water could be a problem. Constance