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Seaside Reflection

                                          The dance of the waves
                                         Ardent embrace of the sun
                                                Eternal moment.

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 9:09:00 PM

    Eileen, love the haiku... and the forever light,, good haiku moment to expose... pd

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 11/30/2012 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Pd...I was wondering if the ending line should read..........sizzling summer! ;) What do you think? Thanks for the post. Have a great day!
  1. Date: 11/28/2012 11:43:00 PM

    I have some friends who would disagree that this was a haiku, but I write them this way myself very often and I LOVE this style. nice seeing some of your haiku tonight!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 11/29/2012 1:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks every so much, Andrea. I appreciate any insights you have on the matter. I have written another one called "Warmth". Would you mind having a read?
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:11:00 AM

    This brings me back to the summer which is a great living memory - keeping me warm - now autumn leaves also..... Conclusion: I LOVE(capital written and meant) haiku! :+) Ellie Daphne

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 11/26/2012 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ellie Daphne...great to read your post. Thank you. I'm glad the haiku warmed you up! ;) Yes...this is a special time of the year as well. Enjoy every bit! I'm dabbling in this form. I find it satisfying! :)
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 1:42:00 PM

    You write so well my poet friend.. love this piece.. strong images in a few short words... Michael

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 11/25/2012 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks ever so much, Michael. :) You've brought me joy. Have a wonderful day!
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:39:00 AM

    You describe a paradise! You are a very lucky lady! Love and hugs, Jack

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 11/25/2012 10:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks ever so much, Jack. I love the sea. I get lost in time. :) Hope all is well with you. Thanks for your lovely post.
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 5:03:00 AM

    Ahhh!!I can just see the scene..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 11/25/2012 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Sara. Glad you enjoyed it. I love the sea, sun, and summer! :) Having lived on the island of Cyprus for 17 years can do that to you! Have a lovely day! God bless!